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Draft work on ch 2

I've decided to draft the first few paragraphs of the new chapter and will be open for edits to things that seem off or too similar to other novels so I may rewrite it

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The next thing I knew was being warm and wet, followed by discomfort. Something was squeezing loud whining comiing me from all sides. Loud noises came from somewhere, yet I could not discern from where. Am I getting taken to the new world like this? Urgh, how fucked up is that?

Then suddenly coldness assaulted me. The warmth was gone and it was cold. I must be out in the arctic or at least not in kiri right. I tried to breathe, but it was hard. It almost pained me to suck the air in.I decided to call for help but all i got was ....a

"Waaa waa" hearing the voice coming out of my mouth i instantly became confused.

"Congratulations its a boy." The voice of an old lady entered his ears.

(Eve Why am i a baby i chose to become a toddler)

[don't worry the time as a baby will be skipped in your mind but this is a chance god gave where you get a look at your parents before tragedy strikes remember your still a cursed soul]

Crap with everything from before i forgot i'm cursed shit well better see where i am i know i chose a nature clan but where are they this house looks small and dirty and there's fog everywhere were are we in nature?

huh whats this warm sensation around my body.oh right i'm a baby duh.

"A curious little thing aren't you? Your father isn't here yet so we can't decide your name. He wanted a son so I'm sure he will be happy."

The woman held me to her chest and closed her eyes, she must be exhausted because her breathing soon became steady as she fell asleep.

This is going to be a lot more dangerous than i thought, closing my eyes i tried to organize my thoughts. As my eyes closed, and the hours past a menu slowly appeared on the left side of my vision.

Name:[]

Title:Flower Fruit Clan/Rose Branch Young Master

Bloodline:Flower Clan(Rose),God Tree Veins

Age:4 hours

Live Points:100%

Chakra Points:100%

Stamina Points:100%

LV: 0 Soul Points: 0

(Eve why did it take so long to check my stats)

[Sorry partner i had to scan the enitire world to geth the average to compare you to it]

oh well thanks but theres something weird in my status

That's right father isn't here yet so i don't really have a name yet huh weird i need get one soon.not having one will be funny but weird because these stats are new (Eve explain my new stats to me)

[Right Away Partner]

The status of Partner shows every important information about you. From Name to Bloodline, Age, Attributes, Title and current level.

Titles may give bonus attributes or have other effects on the User and his surroundings.

Level;

Raising your level is the utmost way to gain power above training. This works with the experience point system. you will gain experience points for finishing quests or killing living things. Once the experience reaches a set threshold you will level up and gain 10 soul points. you will then have to gain more experience points to reach the next level. Each new level needs more experience points than the level before. Each lived year will also grant a level.

Soul Points;

Soul Points can be used to increase your attributes, Jutsu Mastery, Skill Mastery or Elemental Control. They can also be earned through quests and leveling up. Each level provides 10 Soul points Points.

I get it so as my guide you keep track of all theese things for me while letting me use them right.

[correct partner that's exactly what i do]

okay anymore things to explain to me before i pass out even with my blood line i'm still a baby.

[Right]

If Life Points drop to 0 you have died.

If Stamina Points drop to 0 you will be unable to use skills or move fast. Use of Stamina Skills below 0 will use Life Points instead.

If Chakra Points drop to 0 you will be unable to use any kind of Jutsu. The use of Jutsu below 0 will use Life Points.

Strength;

Strength is a numerical value of your strength. It is important for every physical activity. Be it fighting or breathing. Strength increases physical damage. It increases the number of Life Points.

Endurance;

Endurance is a numerical value for your pain threshold and physical damage resistance. Every activity can harm the body. Endurance acts against poisons, illness and physical harm Endurance also governs growth of body.

It also increases the regeneration, as well as the amount of Chakra, Stamina and Life Points.

Intelligence;

Intelligence is a numerical value for you academic skill. The ability to remember, learn and adapt. It is important for every time you think and try to comprehend something. It also increases the regeneration of Chakra and acts against mental tiredness. In conjunction with endurance it lowers the costs of Chakra skills and increases the amount of Chakra Points.

Reflex;

Reflex is a numerical value of the User's speed and flexibility. It is important for all bodily movements and determines, in conjunction with endurance, how cost intensive Stamina skills are. It increases the amount of Stamina Points.

Charisma;

Charisma is a numerical value for your physical attractiveness and trustworthiness. Every interaction with a living being uses charisma. A low value makes the User scary or untrustworthy. A high skill allows the User to influence others to the User's liking.

Luck;

Luck is a numerical value for your worldly luck. Everything is slightly influenced by luck. A lucky person may survive a killing blow, find useful things or win in gambling. Unlucky people will get more often sick, find themselves in dangerous situations more often and will have generally an unlucky life.]

Luck definitely was the best option to choose, as was endurance. Both are extremely important. The first because it influences everything, the second because it has a role in all my energy bars.Charisma was useful too don't want my own parents not to want me and reflex is simple it's always good to flexible as a ninja.

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and that's all i got beware the first half of this chapter is a infodump if you have any way i can shorten the descriptions more post them in the comments

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