Hina's lashes fluttered, her lips parted, a low, desperate whimper escaping as she bit down hard on her lower lip.
"Ohh~… y-yes…" She moaned, her voice thick, trembling, soaked in submission.
Luffy smirked, his fingers threading through her silky pink hair, playing lazily for a moment, before he gripped a handful and yanked her head back, forcing her to arch beneath him.
Hina gasped sharply, her throat fully exposed, her back curving beautifully under his control.
"Ahhh~! F-Fuck—!" She whined, her voice cracking, her body convulsing, completely overwhelmed by his presence.
Luffy held her there, savoring the sight of her desperate, trembling form before another harsh, stinging slap crashed down onto her already marked, sensitive flesh.
Smack~!
Hina let out a sharp, high-pitched cry, her whole body tensing, then immediately melting under him.
"Ahn~! L-Luffy, p-please~...!" She sobbed, her fingers clutching at the floor, her thighs quivering, her hips pressing back against his palm.
Luffy grinned, completely amused by how easily she shattered beneath him.
"Pathetic," He muttered, his grip on her hair tightening slightly as he tilted her head just enough to whisper in her ear.
"I told you to move."
Hina gasped, her breath catching, her entire body locking up.
"Crawl," He ordered, his voice low, commanding, completely unwavering.
A deep, shaky whimper slipped from Hina's lips as her whole body shivered under his authority.
For a moment, she simply lay there, shaking, gasping, her mind fogged, her body paralyzed by pleasure and need.
Then with a soft, desperate moan, she moved.
Slowly... Shakily... Weakly...
She dragged herself forward, her arms barely holding her up, her knees scraping against the floor as she obeyed him without hesitation.
Her hips rolled with every strained movement, her back arching instinctively, her curves swaying beautifully.
She felt Luffy's weight pressing down on her, his heat seeping into her skin, his strength completely controlling her.
And she loved it.
She wanted more. No. She needed more.
Her breath came in hot, shallow pants, her body burning, shaking, begging for him to push her further.
But her pace wasn't fast enough.
Smack~!
A sharp spank landed on her bouncing, reddened flesh.
Hina yelped, a sharp, needy cry breaking from her lips.
"Ahh—!"
"Too slow," Luffy muttered, his grip tightening in her hair, yanking her head back again.
Hina whimpered helplessly, her lips parting, her voice cracking with need.
"N-No…! I-I'm sorry, Captain…!" She sobbed, her thighs trembling violently.
"Then hurry up," He growled, finally releasing her, letting her collapse forward again.
She didn't hesitate. She crawled faster, dragging her aching body forward, her arms shaking, her legs weak, her breath ragged.
Her head swam, her entire being consumed by him—his voice, his orders, his overwhelming control.
She was drowning in him and she never wanted to surface.
"That's more like it," Luffy murmured, watching her with dark, greedy eyes, completely satisfied with her obedience.
But he wasn't done with her.
Not yet.
Smack~!
Another sharp spank landed, making her arch, moan, and tremble violently.
Hina whimpered, moving faster, desperate to please him. Her entire body was on fire, every nerve, every muscle, every inch of her screaming for more.
She could feel her mind slipping, her body pushing itself beyond its limit, yet she refused to slow down.
She refused to disappoint him.
"Good girl," Luffy murmured, grinning as he watched her crumble and obey, moving exactly how he wanted.
Hina moaned at his praise, her entire being vibrating with desperate pleasure.
Her arms were shaking, and her legs were weak, but she kept going.
She would crawl for him. She would break for him.
After all, she belonged to him.
Every slap, every order, every second of his control over her only pushed her deeper, making her burn hotter, and crave harder.
And Luffy?
He was just getting started...
After five long, torturous minutes, Hina finally crawled into the bathroom, her legs shaking, her arms barely holding her up.
Her ass was burning, bright red from the countless handprints Luffy had left on her bouncy, trembling flesh.
She was breathless, her entire body tingling, throbbing, aching.
But before she could even catch her breath, Luffy's hand came down one last time, hitting her raw, swollen ass.
Smack~!
Hina jerked, her body arching, her fingers digging into the cold tiles.
"Slow," Luffy grumbled, shaking his head. His deep, husky voice sent a fresh wave of shivers down her spine.
But this time, he finally lifted himself off her back, standing up.
The moment his heat left her, Hina's body gave out completely. Her arms buckled, her knees slid apart, and she collapsed onto the cold, wet floor.
A sharp, desperate gasp tore from her lips as her cheek pressed against the tile, her chest heaving.
Her entire body was wrecked, trembling, burning with pleasure.
And then the final shockwave hit her.
Her breath caught, her spine curved, and her entire body seized up.
"Ahhh~—!"
A loud, deep, beastly moan erupted from her throat as the waves of release crashed down on her all at once.
Her eyes rolled back, her mouth falling open, drool slipping from her lips. Her thighs quivered violently, her toes curled, and her body jerked and twitched as pleasure overwhelmed every inch of her.
She couldn't stop it.
Couldn't control it.
All she could do was take it, feel it, drown in it.
Her breathy, broken cries filled the bathroom, her body completely lost in the high Luffy had pushed her to.
Luffy watched, his grin widening, his eyes glowing with pure, wicked satisfaction.
"Damn," He muttered, stepping over her, looking down at her wrecked, trembling form.
"Guess I really wore you out, huh?"
Hina could only whimper, her fingers weakly clutching the floor.
Luffy smirked.
"Well, too bad," He chuckled, reaching for the shower knob.
"We're just getting started."
Luffy twisted the knob, and a rush of hot water poured down, streaming over his towering, muscular frame.
The droplets slid down his sculpted chest, tracing the sharp ridges of his abs, and flowing down his powerful legs.
He let out a low sigh, running his hands through his wet, messy hair, the heat soaking into his hard, battle-worn body.
Then, he glanced down and his grin widened.
There she was.
Hina lay sprawled out on the cold, wet tiles, her naked body trembling, her skin flushed, burning, and sensitive.
Completely wrecked.
Luffy chuckled darkly.
"Oi, get in here. Now."
His voice was deep, commanding, teasing.
"Or else…" He trailed off, his grin turning wicked.
Hina shuddered.
A delicious, electrifying shiver ran down her spine, her thighs clenching instinctively at the sound of his voice.
She slowly lifted her head, her half-lidded, dazed eyes locking onto his smug, knowing smirk.
And then she saw it.
His body.
The way the water ran over every muscle, every ridge, every inch of him.
His broad shoulders, his carved chest, his strong, veined arms.
The heat, the raw dominance radiating from him made her stomach tighten, coil, burn.
"Uhmm~... Ooooh~!..."
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