Hey, CosmicYeti, reminded me of something I wanted to ask you… Are the ALL CAPS 'SHOUTS' and the playful~ bits a bit too much? Should I tone them down? While editing the chapters, I feel good adding certain… 'dramatic' pauses or things like that… But if it bothers you, please let me know so I don't ruin the reading experience…
Since this is my first project, it's been a huge learning experience for me, and for the upcoming ones it wouldn't hurt to know if these things bother you.
You can also share here anything that ruins the reading experience…
Thanks, RomeloFF!
