Hello, before you read this fic, I have a few things to say, in my own words, now that the fic is much further along.
This work, if you can even call it work, is the first fic I've ever written, so when I started, I was a complete novice. I had absolutely no experience with this type of writing, but I had some ideas I wanted to get off my chest and have something to work on in my free time.
Obviously, this situation will inevitably lead to many problems and errors, such as the dialogue in this first part. There are other errors, like some words or concepts that, due to my own shortcomings, I overlook or forget, since, personally, I have a bad memory.
I should also mention the system; I've received criticism about it, and to be honest, I couldn't fully justify myself or agree with those people. This happened because it's my first fic, and I wanted to innovate with something new; I created something that I feel works perfectly in my mind, but it failed in practice.
I've tried to improve over time, and I feel I've fixed these aspects, but that doesn't erase my flaws. So, at some point in my life, I plan to fix the One Piece arc, but due to university commitments—I'm focusing almost all my attention on finishing my degree, along with continuing to write chapters for this fic and the other one—I haven't had the time. But I will, and I promise.
I appreciate you trying to read this fic, and also those who have already read it and are up to date. I won't blame you if you abandon it, since, as I said, it was work first and has some flaws, but I've tried hard to fix some, all of them; sadly, not all, but that's why I plan to remake the arc.
In addition, my English isn't very good; I only have the basic knowledge necessary to avoid embarrassing myself in front of a foreigner, hence the following.
First, I write everything in Spanish, and it's worth mentioning that my writing isn't perfect; I'm always proofreading for spelling and grammar mistakes, and I still miss some things. Then I use a translator.
As you can imagine, I might miss details or there might be gaps in the information or ideas that the translator changes, and I don't realize it. When I do, I correct it, but it's not always like that; it only happens sometimes.
With nothing more to add, let the fic begin.