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rewrite?

So here is the dreaded rewrite question, I'm honestly thinking about doing a rewrite because I feel like I started drifting away from the system very early as opposed to later down the line when the main character becomes more self-sufficient and is able to navigate his status tab and the options he has for growth where the system instead of being so integral will become like a partner.

I also think that while it is good she was introduced early to the story, not in current release chapters, I should explain more of adeline's current character because at the start of the story when she is introduced she is 17 the same age as the main character and Nick but she is not introduced until chapter 11 and there are no real templates installed by that point other than the initials that he drew which he still hasn't installed. Also I will be posting more on my discord, I am not too sure about patreon yet there is already a pull up on my discord so please go join and let me know what you think.

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