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Chapter 10 - The Sisterhood of Crimson

The immediate consequence of Makima's calculated kindness was the rapid onset of a fierce, protective "sisterhood." Makima, far more poised and advanced in her studies, took on the role of Kushina's mentor and guardian in Konoha. Kushina, deeply hurt by the constant mockery and desperate for validation, clung to Makima's unwavering support. They were a bizarre pair: the perfectly controlled, elegant Utatane heiress and the chaotic, fiery Uzumaki transfer, both peers in age but polar opposites in demeanor, and both marked by the same shade of crimson hair.

Makima's manor, once a solitary fortress, became Kushina's refuge. Makima taught Kushina about Konoha's etiquette, helped her understand the complex seals on her homework (seals Makima had subtly complicated with a stray mental command), and—most importantly—offered a continuous stream of empathetic validation.

"It's not your fault the instructors are so rigid, Kushina-san," Makima would say, gently touching Kushina's hand. "They are intimidated by your raw strength. They want you to be quiet, dull, and orderly like them. But I appreciate your fire."

This constant affirmation solidified Makima's role as the only person who truly understood Kushina. The Dictation continued, subtle and relentless, transforming Kushina's inherent clumsiness into moments of public humiliation Makima could capitalize on.

The Command:"Kushina Uzumaki must find her most important training scrolls mysteriously ruined by water damage just before a practical exam. She must blame her own carelessness for leaving them too close to the bathhouse window."

One Tuesday morning, Kushina rushed to Makima's desk, tears welling in her violet eyes, a sheaf of soaked paper in her hands. "Makima-chan! I ruined my scroll on the Transformation Jutsu! I was so careless, I must have left it right next to the window!"

Makima's golden eyes widened with perfect, manufactured distress. "Oh, Kushina-san, you poor, powerful girl. You rush too much! You have too much passion for simple chores. Don't worry, your sister is here." Makima calmly pulled out an untouched, identical scroll, which she had prepared the night before. "I have an extra copy, but please promise me you will let me manage the administrative tasks. Your mind needs to focus only on your strength, not on paper."

Kushina hugged Makima fiercely, weeping into her shoulder. "Thank you, thank you, Makima-chan! You're the best sister a girl could have!"

In that moment, Kushina's dependence was complete. Makima had subtly created a problem, allowed Kushina to blame herself, and then provided the perfect, indispensable solution.

Minato Namikaze remained a quiet, persistent presence in the classroom. He never laughed at Kushina's outbursts, nor did he participate in the teasing, yet Kushina still found him intensely irritating. He always looked up when she spoke, always seemed to be watching her during training, and always seemed to be too neat, too quiet, and too polite.

During Taijutsu practice, Kushina was attempting a difficult kick that required precise balance. Makima had issued a command for the earth beneath Kushina's leading foot to momentarily soften, causing her ankle to turn and her to collapse into a spectacular, embarrassing tangle of limbs.

The other students snickered. Kushina's face was the color of her hair.

Makima rushed over first, kneeling to check her ankle. "Terrible luck, Kushina-san! You pushed too hard! You must learn your physical limits!"

But before Makima could finish her concerned lecture, a quiet voice interrupted.

"No, it was the footing," Minato said simply, having approached without anyone noticing. He wasn't looking at Kushina's face, but at the patch of disturbed earth. "The ground here is uneven. You need to compensate by shifting your chakra anchor to the other heel. It's a common flaw in this training zone."

Kushina snapped at him instantly. "Shut up, sissy! I wasn't asking for help from some quiet boy who hides behind his books!"

Minato didn't recoil or flush this time. He just gave her a slight, non-judgmental nod. "Apologies, Kushina-san. But the ground is still soft. Be careful." He then walked away, returning to his own perfect routine.

Later that week, Kushina found a small, neatly folded piece of paper on her desk. It contained only a minimalist, detailed diagram showing the flaw in the Taijutsu training ground's layout and a precise explanation of the chakra shift needed to compensate. The handwriting was elegant but firm.

Kushina crumpled the note in frustration. Why did he have to be so perfectly correct? It was infuriating. She resolved to hate him even more fiercely for his quiet, unsolicited correctness.

But she didn't throw the note away. Makima's voice might comfort her feelings, but Minato's note fixed the technical problem. She felt a flicker of confusion—a tiny crack in the order Makima was constructing.

By the end of the three months, Makima had successfully ingrained the belief in Kushina that she was a wonderful person cursed with severe, self-sabotaging clumsiness. Makima, her best friend, was the only antidote to her own chaos.

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