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After a moment the scientists go do other science thing. 'Okay I need the maximum info possible, first of all let's concentrate on myself and the change that my new race gave me.'
I start to observe myself and appart from the obvious tail, wings and the body of a 9 years old, I remarks something about the aura I said my body gave of, I can control it, and information about it are like engraved in my brain, 'no it seems more profound than that maybe in my soul?'
So I start look at that place that seem to hold my ability and bingo, it seems that in this place there is a comprehensive list of my abilities. I understand there primary fonction and I can sense that using them would be like using a limbs. 'Well I will need to train them, after all you still need to train your body if you want to use it perfectly, and I need the strength to avoid death and be able to enjoy myself.'
So my ability, first of all my race, I am a succubus, more precisely a succubi the first stage of evolution of a succubus. There is some info about what I need to do to evolve, more than info it's more of an instinct, to eat a maximum of emotion the more intense the emotion and the stronger the person from where it originate, the better it is for me.
'Well I would have done it regardless, even if it was detrimental to me, but if it permit me to become stronger it's good.'
Now my abilities first the resistance, they are exactly that, they help me resist, no improvement to do on that front. I note the four that I have, pain, thermal fluctuation, magic and abnormal condition resistance. I still note the presence of magic resistance which means there is magic in this world.I will need to learn it later and see if I can get more resistance.
Now for the skill, the first is already my favorite even if I didn't see the other,
The skill was emotiondevourer, it permit me to detect the emotion of other for a range of around 20 meter passively and I can augment it. But more importantly it permit me to eat emotion like food, and convert them into energy for my growths, normally the augmentation is gradual, as my stomach need time to process them, but maybe it's the fact that I am the first of my race, or if it's due to the emotional void I have inside of me, but I can process the emotion in an instant, and strengthen myself extremely fast so much that I think in a year or so, I will evolve.
For the over, interesting one there is emotion aura it seem to be an aura exclusive to my race, it permit to exacerbate the emotion of someone, to a level that even a slight fear can become a full blown terror attack.
It also seems that it is this skill that give my boby this quality, it seem to manipulate the perception of the one who look at me to have a favorable opinion of me, and by favorable I means that the average guy will will literally fall in love at first sign and worship me like a goddess if I am not careful.
The other are flight, self explanatory.
Material creation, that once I found about I created a dress on myself, a simple black dress that ended at my knee, nothing too extravagent but of superior quality to everything that was made in my previous world, it even have some defensive ability.
And finally mental magic,I gess I already have magic, but I still will need to learn over type, it seem that mental attack are the main strength of my race, contrary to skill it is more complicated to use, more like a encyclopedic rather than an instinct, like I have the instructions but I need to understand them, which is honestly easy, I did it on the second try a simple mental attack to make one of the scientists fell observed. It's pretty good, but the important thing is that I can create over magic by studying the mechanic of one, so I will be able to create fire, ice and other magic but not now, I don't want to destroy the capsule where I am. It seem to have effect on my growths, not as much as feeding on emotion but enough to quicken my evolution by a month or two.
Well these ability of mine gave me an idea, if I am correct the time for my evolution will be halved and I will be able to train my ability.
'But more important, it will augment the quality and quantity of my meal.'
And so I started to experiment and in a blink six months had passed.
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Six months later
It was really an enjoyable six months.
During that time I got to become familiar with my new power, and I found a method to augment my meal quantity and quality.
You see the more numerous and the more intense the emotion are, the better but there's some rule.
For example if I or an other person artificially induce or strengthen the emotion with mental magic or my aura, it will no longer count, as the emotion are not true anymore if that makes sense, but the mind is really easy to manipulate, for me at least, for example, I provoked on some of the scientists terror panic as soon as they came near my room, that in itself doesn't count, but the paranoia and fear they developed were real, and so even after I stoped they still felt fear and apprehension each time they passed near me.
I also created couple, it's surprisingly easy, fake attractiveness between too people long enough and the feeling become genuine in a mater of days, after that I just have to enjoy the feeling of love and passion, and when I see that the emotion are calming down I make them cheat on each over and enjoy as there nascent love is transformed into full blown hate for each over.
The only one I couldn't manipulate were, exposition man and is body guards a shame because there are the most powerful here and so the most appetizing. I think exposition man caught me and my litle game. I wasn't particularly subtle about it after all, but he did nothing, he was more intrigued than anything else.
'It was truly enjoyable but I now it's time for a dramatic entrance.' I thought totaly not just wanting to shock all my audience for a quick meal and finalizing my evolution.
All the scientists are in front of me and the bodyguard are at the entrance , a perfect audience for my birth in this world.
So I started, during my time experimenting I managed to control what I think is my mana and I started to repress and control it until it became an instinct, apparently it was good enough to fool the scientists and make them question how my magic aura suddenly dropped so low.it also permitted me to got better control of my magic, my reserve tripled since the first time I had woken up in this world and for the first time time I let it go renpemt, destroying my capsules and shocking everyone in front of me giving me the last push to evolve.
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POV : exposition man
These past month had been full of suprise. First a subject that was considered a failure due to a lack of ego suddenly developed one. The idea behind the creation of the succubus race was simple in essence, create a race with same potential as daemon but with a body and reproduction ability. For that I used part of my own body to mix with the spiritual body of daemons and create the first succubus, and the origin of her species.
But I encountered a problem the body created didn't have ego, now it will normally not be a big deal, just incarnate an elemental inside will create the ego needed. But there was the problem it was impossible, the body rejected every spiritual entity's that we tried to incarnate inside, worse when we forced the process the spirit incarnated inside, who was a great elemental of darkness, had is ego destroyed in one hour leaving nothing behind but the remnant of it power.
I was preparing to terminate the project, it had already served it's purpose I did collect precious data to finally creating my greatest creation one I can call my child. But that's when it finally developed an ego on it's own.
And from this moment on it surpassed all of my expectations. Some time after this event more than fifty pourcent of my assistant working on the project reported to have developed an instinctual fear, when they are near the chamber of the original succubus.
Some time later many of the over half of my assistant on this project, were reported to have developed intimate relationship, that would normally not be too out of the ordinary, but ten couple in one week seemingly having developed sentiments overnight? I needed to investigate, because if I don't find the cause the curiosities will kill me.
So for the first time since it's awakening I returned to the chamber of the original succubus, and one of my questions was immediately answered has I feeled the mental attack coming from the chamber, it had no effect on me has I am more powerful than the user but I understand now what's happening, she learned how to use magic and use it to terrify, or make my assistant fall in love. Now one final question. Why?
I asked one of my guard to rest here and make mesure to see what's happening, it's not ideal but he's is at least resistant to abnormal condition and powerful enough that unless she try realy hard, she wouldn't be able to do anything and she as not enough experience to know how to bypass resistance without brute forcing.
I couldn't wait to have the result none of the other succubus created from the data and cell of the original exhibit such peculiar behavior.
And after two months I finally had my answers. After a massive break up of all the couple the succubus seemed to show a big enough augment in it's strength to be noticable even without specialized instrument, and it's then that I had an idea.
I went to the chamber were she is and started to gradually let go of the rein I have on my emotion for suppressing my curiosities, stopping me to start experimenting on everything and everyone around me, and I saw the augmentation in her power corresponding to my emotion augmentation.
It was fascinating I expected her race to feed on soul like daemon, but to think they evolved to feed of emotion, that's the reason why she started all this she wanted to feed on more emotion.
After having the respond to my questions,
I started to observe her more and more as her rise in power was truly surprising has she now has much magicule as a greater daemon even if she didn't even evolve yet.
I have truly only one problem with her race, it's the fact there are all women, from various test I determined that no male succubus will ever be born. It's simply not possible even if they can become spiritual entity's later on via evolution they will not be able to change there sex.
As for there reproduction I don't know how it will work,they definitely can but I don't know how it works, it will be a surprise for later.
I am forced out of my thought as in front of me the subject of my thought start to destroy her pod. With her massive magic aura.
Now I wonder why she did have to destroy it, but as I look at my assistant that all have a look of fear and even my guard, who barged inside the room after sensing the massive aura, who have a look of unease, I immediately understand.
'I wonder how emotion taste like? For her to carve it so much it must be good.' my thought come to a stop as I observe, the first evolution of a succubus as she is enveloped in a purple practically black aura.
I don't even have time to make measure before the aura dissipate and a mature looking woman in a short black dress, her beauty is dark and attract the look of everyone present like an abyss you can't help but look at.
I am the first to escape her charm as I realized what just happened, I can accept that she can evolve, her energy level were certainly in the range were I expected an evolution at any moment, but normally when one undergrowth an evolution they become unconscious for a certain period of time for them to adapt to their new strength, but she finished her's in second and from her aura the change is significant she is twice as powerful as before with a augmentation of the quality of her aura by many fold.
'So how is it possible, did she seriously take control of all her new power in an instant only an handful of people are capable of it and she is barely six months old. She truly is an interesting one.'
She looked around her taking in everything around her and them her gaze stayed on me.She looked at me in the eyes and asked.
"So what is your name my Ohhhh so dear creator. I can't keep calling you exposition man in my head and an other question what is mine it's rude to call me subject this and that even if I am technically a test subject"she said with a false tone of respect in her voice not even masked.
I ignored the way she referred to me and smiled will responding "My name is Twilight Valentine, as for your name you will need to earn it with a litle test."