Cherreads

DUNE ANOMALY

ZirGOOD
28
chs / week
The average realized release rate over the past 30 days is 28 chs / week.
--
NOT RATINGS
1k
Views
Synopsis
There was no pain. Pain is a biological concept, a warning signal for organisms that can be repaired. What happened to me wasn't an injury; it was a suppression. One moment, I was crossing a rain-slicked street in a city whose name no longer matters, the air thick with the smell of ozone and cheap coffee. The next, reality buckled. It wasn't a truck, or lightning. It was as if the universe had blinked and I were a speck of dust caught in God's eyelid. The blackness that followed wasn't the absence of light. It was a blackness with weight, with texture. A pressurized ocean of nothingness. I don't know how long I floated there, if "time" and "being" were still applicable verbs. Then, the Entity manifested. It had no form. To describe it would be to impose human limitations upon it. It was a consciousness so vast that its mere thought generated gravity. Its voice didn't resonate in my nonexistent ears; It vibrated directly into the core of what remained of my consciousness, like the tolling of a bell the size of a solar system. "A CORRECTION," the Entity said. Its tone wasn't apologetic, but rather a statement of fact. "YOUR THREAD WAS PREMATURELY CUT BY A FLUCTUATION IN MY PACE. A DECIMAL ERROR IN THE COSMIC MATRIX." I was incapable of responding. Fear was too small for this place. "THE LAW OF BALANCE DEMANDS RESTITUTION. YOU CANNOT RETURN TO YOUR BROKEN TIMELINE. THE OPTIONS ARE DISSOLUTION INTO THE ETHER OR REINSERTION INTO A NEW FABRIC." Reincarnation. The choice was instinctive, the last desperate cry of life clinging to existence. "SO BE IT. YOU WILL CHOOSE THE STAGE." BUT YOU MUST ACCEPT THE COST FOR THE MISTAKE. THE UNIVERSE YOU ARE GOING TO IS FRAGILE. YOU WILL NEED WEIGHT TO ANCHOR IT. The Entity didn't give me a list of options. It simply instilled the gifts into my essence. And they felt like molten lead was being poured into my soul. First, the Structure. I felt my ghost pattern thicken, becoming impossibly hard. A biology engineered under a dying red sun, meant to drink the radiation of younger stars and convert it into divine power. But with it came weakness: dependence on that light and vulnerability to the radiation of its lost home, a stone that doesn't exist in the universe I am going to... perhaps. Second, the Archive. It was the most painful. It wasn't a data download. It was the opening of a dam. The complete knowledge of a civilization that had transcended matter and energy. Level 10. Equations for creating baby universes, the music of the spheres, the language of creation itself. My human mind screamed under the pressure. It was like trying to contain an entire ocean in a teacup. I would have to learn to filter, to ignore 99.9% of that cosmic noise just so I could think about how to tie my shoes without accidentally triggering a quantum collapse. Third, the Seed. A genetic promise. The absolute certainty of propagation. The guarantee that any union would result in offspring not only viable, but superior. A forced improvement of the species. In the void, this felt cold, clinical. A tool of biological domination. "FATE IS SET," the Entity boomed, its presence beginning to fade, leaving me alone with my new and terrible burden. "YOU WILL BE INSERTED INTO A POINT OF FRICTION. A LINEAGE ALREADY OVERLOADED WITH DESTINY." NOW IT WILL CARRY TWICE THE WEIGHT. The darkness began to spin. I felt an attraction, a dizzying fall toward a distant, cold point of light.
VIEW MORE

Chapter 1 - CHAPTER 1:

Caladan Castle is a fortress of black stone and perpetual dampness, designed to withstand storms that would drown other worlds. But that night, the storm was inside the birthing chamber.

The first cry tore through the air heavy with incense and medicinal steam.

Paul had been born.

The baby, small and covered in blood, was quickly cleaned by the Mapes and the trusted midwives. Lady Jessica, pale as wax, let her head fall onto the sweat-soaked pillows. She had done her duty. She had defied the Bene Gesserit Sisterhood to give her Duke a son, but the birth had been natural, human, exhausting.

The heavy wooden door opened. Duke Leto Atreides entered, bringing with him the chill of the stone halls. His gray eyes, usually calculating, shone with raw emotion.

“Jessica,” he whispered, approaching the bed, disregarding protocol. He looked at the small bundle in a midwife’s arms. A son. She has given me a son.

Relief flooded the room. It was a perfect moment. A picture of dynastic victory.

And then, the picture shattered.

Jessica let out a strangled cry. Her body arched violently on the bed, the tendons in her neck tensing like violin strings about to snap.

“My lady!” cried the midwife, almost releasing Paul.

“It’s not over!” gasped Dr. Suk, his imperial conditioning fighting against panic. “There’s… there’s another one! Duke, stand back!”

Leto recoiled, his hand instinctively going to the dagger at his belt, not out of threat, but out of helplessness. No one had predicted it. Not the scanners, not the Brotherhood’s presciences. I was the ghost in the machine.

The second birth was swift, brutal. I didn’t fight my way out; I simply forced my way through.

When the doctor pulled me out, silence fell over the room like a lead leak.

I didn't cry.

And then, it happened.

A faint but unmistakable light began to emanate from my skin. It wasn't the glow of sanctity, but a biological radiation, the byproduct of solar cells activating for the first time in a dark universe. My veins shimmered with liquid gold beneath the translucent skin before settling.

The doctor, trembling, hastily placed me on a stainless steel surgical tray beside the bed, afraid to touch me more than necessary.

"He's... he's a boy," the doctor stammered. "But his temperature... it's elevated."

I felt the cold metal against my back. The survival instinct of my new physiology kicked in. Level 10 knowledge flooded my childlike brain, and for a microsecond, I lost motor control.

My small, wrinkled right hand closed around the edge of the hardened steel tray.

SCREAM.

The sound was sharp, piercing. The metal didn't jingle. It screeched.

Before the astonished eyes of Duke Leto and Lady Jessica, the edge of the solid steel tray bent like wet clay beneath my newborn fingers. The metal twisted, leaving the perfect imprint of my tiny hand etched into the indestructible alloy.

I released the metal. The glow of my skin faded, hidden beneath the appearance of a normal child. But the damage was done. The tray was ruined.

Leto approached slowly, his face pale. He looked at the deformed tray. Then he looked at my hand, untouched, without a single scratch. Finally, his eyes met mine.

I looked back. For a second, my eyes didn't resemble those of a baby, but ancient, deep wells.

“What is this?” Leto whispered, his voice devoid of the joy of moments before, replaced by a reverential fear. “Jessica… what have we brought into this world?”

Jessica, exhausted and terrified, looked at Paul, so human and fragile, and then at me, the child who shone and bent steel at birth.

“I don’t know, Leto,” she whispered, and for the first time in her life, the Bene Gesserit felt true fear of the future. “I don’t know.”