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SOFTLY BROKEN

Youssef_Elouizari
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Some people repair buildings. Others learn to live inside what cannot be repaired. Nizar has built his life around restoration — old spaces, fractured structures, quiet ruins. What he never learned to rebuild is himself. When he meets Rayma, their connection is not immediate, dramatic, or loud. It grows slowly, in silences that feel heavier than words, in moments where nothing happens — and everything changes. SOFTLY BROKEN is a literary novel about emotional restraint, unspoken wounds, and the fragile intimacy between two people who are not trying to save each other — only to remain. A story where love does not arrive to heal, but to witness.
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Chapter 1 - The Silence in the Coffee Shop

The rain traced lazy, meandering paths down the windowpane, blurring the city lights into streaks of gold and white. Inside, the coffee shop was a pocket of warmth and quiet murmur, the air thick with the scent of roasted beans and damp wool. Raima sat at her usual corner table, her fingers tracing the rim of her untouched cup. She watched the condensation bead and slide, a miniature replication of the world outside her window.

It was a ritual, this Tuesday evening stillness. A space she carved out between the relentless pace of her work at the architectural firm and the silent apartment that waited for her. The noise of the city, the demands of clients, the precise lines of her drafts—they all fell away here, leaving room for the quieter, more persistent hum of memory. It never shouted; it was a background radiation, a faint ache in the bones of her history. She had built a life over it, a good life, structured and ambitious. But sometimes, in these quiet moments, she could feel the old fractures, like fine cracks in porcelain, still there beneath the glaze.

The bell above the door chimed, a soft, clear sound. A man walked in, bringing with him a gust of the damp, cold evening. He was tall, with a stillness about him that seemed to push back the gentle bustle of the shop. He didn't look around for a table; he moved directly to the counter, ordered a simple black coffee, and took a seat at the far end of the room, by the bookshelf. His movements were economical, devoid of unnecessary gesture. He pulled a book from his coat pocket, a well-worn volume with a spine cracked from use, and began to read. He did not check his phone. He did not fidget. He simply existed within his own silence.

Raima found herself observing him, not with overt curiosity, but with the detached attention she might give to an interesting architectural form. His silence wasn't empty; it was dense, occupied. It was the quiet of a deep lake, not a shallow pothole. She recognized the quality, though she couldn't have said how. It was in the way he held his shoulders, a slight tension that suggested not discomfort, but a habitual guarding. It was in the focused downward tilt of his head, as if the world within the pages was more demanding than the one outside.

Her own thoughts, often a tangled skein of past and present, began to order themselves around this observation. She thought of her father, a man whose silence had been a wall of anger. This man's silence felt different. It felt like preservation.

She looked down at her own hands, at the faint, silvered scar that bisected the back of her left hand, a souvenir from a shattered car window a lifetime ago. She rubbed it absently, a tactile memory. The past was not a story she told; it was a landscape she inhabited, its weather shifting her internal climate. She had learned to forecast it, to brace for the sudden squalls of recollection. Today was a still day. A watching day.

The man turned a page. The sound was crisp in the quiet. He took a sip of his coffee, his eyes never leaving the book. Raima finally lifted her own cup, the chamomile tea now lukewarm. It tasted of flowers and dust. She set it down, the ceramic clicking softly against the wooden table.

A child at a nearby table laughed, a bright, unburdened sound. The man by the bookshelf did not look up, but Raima saw the slightest pause in his reading, a momentary stillness in his fingers holding the page. A reaction, then. Not detached. Selective.

She wondered what his story was. Not with any intention of discovering it, but with the simple, human acknowledgment that everyone carried a weight. Her own was a familiar companion, a locked trunk she had learned to live alongside, though she never tried to discard it. To discard it would be to discard a part of her own foundation, however fractured. She sometimes thought her ambition, her drive to create solid, beautiful, enduring structures, was her way of building a world where such trunks could be safely stored, out of the way of daily life.

The rain intensified, drumming a steady rhythm against the window. People outside hurried past, collars turned up, faces hidden. The coffee shop felt more than ever like a sanctuary. Raima watched a droplet race others down the glass, winning for a moment before merging with a larger stream and disappearing.

When she looked back toward the bookshelf, the man was looking at her.

It was not a direct, challenging stare, nor was it the vacant gaze of someone lost in thought. He had simply lifted his eyes from his book and they had found hers, as if her study of the rain had drawn his own line of sight. There was no smile, no nod of acknowledgment. Just a brief, clear moment of contact. His eyes were a dark, muted green, like moss on stone. In that second, Raima felt a peculiar sensation—not seen, but *recognized*. It was as if he had identified in her a fellow citizen of that quiet country of carried history.

Then he looked back down at his book, the connection severed as cleanly as it had been made.

Raima's heart, which had not sped up, now felt peculiarly steady. The hum of memory softened, not gone, but momentarily balanced by that strange point of silent contact. She finished her tea, gathered her things—her notebook, her pen, the scarf of soft grey wool. As she stood, she glanced once more toward the corner. He was still reading, absorbed again, a statue of contemplation.

She pushed open the door, the bell chiming her exit, and stepped into the cool, rain-washed evening. The air smelled of wet pavement and distant petrol. She walked toward the subway, her footsteps measured. The encounter settled in her mind, not as an event, but as a texture. A silence had met another silence, and in the meeting, each had been, for a fragment of a second, slightly altered.

She did not expect to see him again. The city was vast, and connections like that were fleeting, accidental. Yet, as she descended into the brightly lit underground, the image of the man in the quiet corner, with his dense silence and moss-green eyes, remained with her, a still point in the moving night.

The following Tuesday arrived, cloaked in a brittle, clear cold. The rain had been swept away by a sharp wind that whistled through the concrete canyons. Raima almost didn't go to the coffee shop. A project deadline loomed, a set of blueprints for a community library required a final review, and the allure of her own orderly desk was strong. But the memory of last week's peculiar stillness, that moment of wordless recognition, had woven itself into the ritual. To break the habit now felt like an avoidance she didn't care to examine.

She pushed the door open, the same bell announcing her. The warmth enveloped her. She scanned the room, a casual glance that felt, even to her, deliberately nonchalant. He was there. Same corner, same chair, a different book, but the same posture: a contained world of one.

Raima went to the counter, ordered her chamomile, and hesitated. Her usual table was free. The one directly opposite his, by the other window, was also free. A choice presented itself, trivial yet weighted. To take her usual seat was to declare the previous week an anomaly, to re-establish the comfortable distance of strangers in a shared space. To take the other seat was to acknowledge the thread, however fine, that had connected their silences.

She walked to the table opposite his and sat down.

She felt the decision like a physical shift in the air. She busied herself with unpacking her notebook, a folder of work papers, arranging her pen just so. When she finally allowed herself to look up, he was watching her. Not furtively, but with a calm, assessing gaze. Again, there was no smile. He gave a slow, almost imperceptible nod. It was not a greeting of friends, but an acknowledgment of a shared understanding: *You have chosen to sit here. I have noted it.*

Raima nodded back, a mirror of his brevity. Then she opened her folder, the rustle of paper loud in her ears. The work, however, refused to cohere. The lines of the library's reading room, usually a source of focused pleasure, seemed flat and uninspired. She was acutely aware of his presence, a steady, silent pole across the space. She found herself listening for the turn of a page, the soft click of his cup on the saucer. Her own silence felt different now—not a private sanctuary, but a space between two people, charged with unspoken questions.

After twenty minutes of reading the same paragraph about load-bearing stresses, she closed the folder. She sipped her tea and looked out the window. The street was less crowded tonight. A street musician, undeterred by the cold, was playing a mournful tune on a violin.

"He's playing it in the wrong key."

The voice was low, quiet, but clear. It seemed to vibrate in the space between their tables. Raima turned. The man was looking at her, his book closed on the table, his long fingers resting on its cover.

"I'm sorry?" she said, her own voice sounding unused.

"The violinist. The song is in D minor. He's playing it as if it's in A minor. It changes the nature of the lament. Makes it… simpler. Less profound."

Raima listened. The music was sad, but it had a generic quality to it, a kind of musical shorthand for sorrow. She knew little about musical keys, but she understood the concept of depth versus simplicity.

"How can you tell?" she asked, turning fully in her chair to face him.

He shrugged, a small, fluid motion. "You just hear it, after a while. The intervals are wrong. It's like…" He paused, searching for a metaphor. "It's like seeing a copy of a great painting where all the shadows have been lightened. The shape is there, but the soul is muted."

The analogy struck her. It was an architect's metaphor, in a way—about structure, light, and essence. "You're a musician?"

"No," he said, and a shadow passed behind his eyes, so brief she might have imagined it. "I was. A long time ago. Now I just listen."

She waited, but he didn't elaborate. The confession, if it was one, lay between them, a single piece of a much larger puzzle. He had offered a fragment, a chip of his silence.

"I'm Raima," she said, not extending her hand, just offering the name into the space.

He considered it for a moment. "Nazar," he replied.

The exchange of names made the space between them official, a bridge built on the slender piers of a misplayed violin tune. A silence followed, but it was different from before. It was a shared silence now, companionable rather than parallel.

"What do you do, Raima?" he asked. His gaze was direct, but not intrusive. It held a genuine curiosity.

"I'm an architect. Or, I'm trying to be a good one." She gestured to her closed folder. "A library. It's giving me trouble tonight."

"What kind of trouble?"

She was surprised by the question. People usually nodded politely when she mentioned her profession. They rarely asked for specifics. "The trouble of meaning," she found herself saying, the words coming more easily than she expected. "It's a space for stories, for knowledge, for quiet thought. How do you design for that? How do you build a vessel for something so intangible? Right now, it just feels like a collection of rooms."

Nazar looked at her for a long moment. "You're thinking of it as a container," he said finally. "Perhaps think of it as an instrument. Like that violin. The shape of the body, the length of the neck, the placement of the strings—they don't contain the music. They allow it to be created, to resonate. Your library shouldn't hold stories; it should invite them to be discovered, to resonate within it."

Raima stared at him. It was a fundamental shift in perspective, articulated with a quiet clarity that bypassed years of academic theory. The idea settled into her mind, luminous and clear. The reading room wasn't a box with books; it was a soundboard. The light from the windows wasn't just illumination; it was a score. The silence it needed to foster wasn't an absence, but a specific, designed quality of air.

"That's… brilliant," she said, the word inadequate.

A faint, almost ghost of a smile touched the corner of his mouth. It transformed his face, softening the guarded lines, revealing a warmth that was startling in its contrast to his usual stillness. It was gone as quickly as it appeared. "It's just another way of listening," he said.

Outside, the violinist concluded his piece with a shaky, discordant note. Nazar winced, almost imperceptibly. The spell of the conversation broke, but the connection remained, a live wire now humming between them.

"I should let you work," Nazar said, though he made no move to reopen his book.

"You haven't interrupted," Raima said. "You've helped."

He nodded, accepting this. They sat for another few minutes in the new, charged quiet. Raima opened her folder again, and this time, the lines of the blueprint seemed alive with possibility. She began to sketch in the margins, quick, fluid lines indicating light wells, acoustic buffers, zones of intimacy and expanse. She worked with a focused energy she hadn't felt in weeks.

When she finally paused, her wrist aching, she looked up. Nazar was reading again, but he sensed her gaze and lifted his eyes.

"Thank you," she said, simply.

He held her look, his moss-green eyes unreadable yet utterly present. "The echo is often more important than the initial sound," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. Then he returned to his book.

Raima packed her things slowly. As she stood to leave, she felt a compulsion to say more, to solidify this fragile, unexpected thing. But words seemed clumsy now. She simply nodded in his direction. He looked up and returned the nod.

Walking home, the cold air felt exhilarating, not biting. The city's noises were a symphony she was hearing in the right key for the first time. She carried with her the blueprint, now filled with new ideas, and the echoing sound of his words: *Think of it as an instrument.*

She also carried the clear, unsettling knowledge that Nazar's silence was not empty. It was a deep, resonant chamber, and she had just heard the first, faint echo from within it.