This story is a bit darker, focusing on the psychological shadows that crawl when you're all alone. Lock your doors.
The Thirteenth Step
Elara knew the rules of the old house by heart. Her grandmother had repeated them until they were a rhythmic chant:
Never leave the back door unbolted after sunset.
If you hear your name from the woods, don't answer.
Never, under any circumstances, count the stairs to the basement.
Elara was seventeen, and she didn't believe in superstitions. She believed in physics, logic, and the fact that her grandmother's dementia was worsening.The Curiosity
It was a humid Friday night. A storm was bruising the sky purple, and the house felt cramped. To prove a point to her own racing heart, Elara stood at the top of the basement door. She flicked the switch. The lightbulb flickered and died, leaving only the faint, gray glow of the hallway behind her.
"One," she whispered, stepping down.
Two. Three. Four.
The air grew significantly colder. It smelled of damp earth and something sweet—like rotting lilies.
Five. Six. Seven.
By the tenth step, she couldn't see the floor anymore. The darkness was thick, almost oily. She reached out to touch the wall, but her hand met nothing but cold, wet stone that felt suspiciously like skin. She flinched, but kept going.Eleven. Twelve.
She stopped. Her foot hovered in the air. She knew this basement. She had helped her father move boxes here years ago. There were only twelve steps. There had always been twelve steps.
She lowered her foot. It hit wood.
"Thirteen," she breathed.
The Mirror in the Dark
The moment her weight settled on the thirteenth step, the basement lights didn't come on—but the silence changed. It became "heavy," as if the room was suddenly filled with people holding their breath.
A soft click-clack echoed. It was the sound of a typewriter.
Elara pulled out her phone and turned on the flashlight. The beam cut through the dark, landing on a small wooden desk in the center of the concrete floor. Sitting there was a girl.The girl was wearing Elara's favorite yellow sweater. She had Elara's messy ponytail. But when the girl turned around, she had no face—just a smooth, featureless surface of pale flesh.
Except for the mouth. A jagged, hand-drawn slit that looked like it had been carved with a dull knife.
The Trade
The girl didn't move, but Elara's phone began to vibrate violently. A text message appeared from an unknown number:
"You counted me into existence, Elara. Now, I need your eyes to see the world you've been enjoying."
Elara tried to run back up the stairs, but she found herself running in place. The stairs were moving like an escalator, descending deeper into the eThe faceless girl stood up. Her movements were jerky, like a broken puppet. She began to climb the stairs toward Elara.
"Stay away!" Elara screamed.
The girl stopped. She tilted her head. Then, the jagged mouth opened, and Elara's own voice came out of it, perfect and clear:
"Don't worry, Elara. I'll take good care of your grandmother. She won't even know the difference. After all... she's the one who left me down here the last time a girl counted to thirteen."
The Final Sight
The flashlight on Elara's phone died. In the absolute blackness, she felt a pair of cold, thin fingers gently touch her eyelids.
"Close them," her own voice whispered in her ear. "It's my turn to look."earth. For every step she climbed, she sank two steps lowerThe faceless girl stood up. Her movements were jerky, like a broken puppet. She began to climb the stairs toward Elara.
"Stay away!" Elara screamed.
The girl stopped. She tilted her head. Then, the jagged mouth opened, and Elara's own voice came out of it, perfect and clear:
"Don't worry, Elara. I'll take good care of your grandmother. She won't even know the difference. After all... she's the one who left me down here the last time a girl counted to thirteen."
The Final Sight
The flashlight on Elara's phone died. In the absolute blackness, she felt a pair of cold, thin fingers gently touch her eyelids.
"Close them," her own voice whispered in her ear. "It's my turn to look."The next morning, Elara walked into the kitchen. She made tea, kissed her grandmother on the cheek, and bolted the back door. She looked in the hallway mirror and smiled. Her eyes were bright and clear.
But deep in the basement, behind a wall that shouldn't exist, something with no face began to scream—and no one heard a sound.
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