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Chapter 10 - Chapt. 10: Unraveling

The Unraveling

​The moment had finally arrived. As George approached the center of the resonance field to demonstrate his magical control, he forced himself to exude a confidence he wasn't entirely sure he felt. He took his stance, his hands poised and ready to weave the intricate spells he had practiced until his fingers bled in the Pattern Yard. The surrounding audience of Harvesters held their breath, a heavy silence falling over the field as the countdown began. The targets materialized in a blur of shimmering light—floating, translucent orbs that pulsed with a faint rhythmic hum. George raised his hand, centering his mind on the flow of his aura, channeling it toward the first target with the precision Zorro had demanded of him. But just as he released the surge, a rogue, violent gust of wind swept across the clearing. It caught the tail of his spell, disrupting his focus. Instead of a clean strike, the bolt of magic veered wildly off course, slamming into a decorative boulder at the edge of the field and shattering it into a spray of grit. Laughter and sharp whispers erupted from the sidelines. George's stomach did a slow, sickening roll as he risked a glance toward the observation platform. The Watchers' expressions, partially obscured by those cold silver masks, had turned visibly skeptical, their pens frozen over their ledgers. The initial setback echoed in George's mind like a funeral knell as the next set of targets appeared. He bit his lip, trying to steady his shaking hands, desperate to remember the core of his training.

"Flow, not force," he whispered, the words a mantra against the rising panic. "Flow, not force."

​He tried to adjust his output, but the pressure was too great. With every surge of power, a deafening explosion followed—not from the targets, but from the magic itself. His spells were backfiring, detonating prematurely with a force that sent shockwaves of panic through the onlookers. The targets didn't just fade; they were being obliterated by raw, chaotic energy that George seemed unable to contain. Each spell he cast felt plagued by unseen forces, as if the very air were fighting him. Doubt and suspicion began to fall upon the young mage from the village. In a moment of sheer desperation, as he lined up a shot at the final, most distant target, George's magic abandoned him entirely. He pushed, he willed, he begged the Tele-stone to respond, but the spell dissipated into a pathetic wisp of smoke before it even left his palm. He stood there, frozen in the center of the field, the silence of the crowd far more painful than the noise. The cruel laughter of his rivals rang out. A particular group of older, more experienced Harvesters—men who wore their scars like badges of office—began openly taunting him.

​"Why is he even here? And he thinks he can make it through the Forest of Golems?" one jeered, his voice laced with malice. "Looks like he couldn't light a candle in a draft, let alone pass the Harvest."

​George could feel the weight of their jeers and the Watchers' disapproving gazes bearing down on him, threatening to crush his spirit. With each passing moment, his confidence waned. He looked around frantically, seeing the other participants effortlessly manipulating the elements with the kind of precision and skill he had only dreamt of. Daunted by his disastrous performance, George realized his dream was at stake. The Watchers exchanged worried glances, their mouths tight and unyielding beneath their masks. He saw his chances of passing the trial crumbling before his eyes. The shadows of doubt loomed large, and a crushing sense of unworthiness washed over him. A wave of shame followed, cold and suffocating. Maybe he wasn't as skilled in magic as he had hoped. Maybe the boy from the quiet village truly didn't have what it took to be a mage.

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