Chapter 13 : The Dying Man
Brixton Library — August 2, 2010, 9:15 AM
The public terminals at Brixton Library ran on a connection speed that would have embarrassed a dial-up modem in 1998. I'd been staring at the Transport for London licensing page for forty minutes, watching the cursor spin, and my coffee had gone cold in its paper cup.
Three badge numbers. Charlie's network had delivered them — cab drivers operating in the Lambeth-Southwark overlap zone, the geographic sweet spot my profiling had identified. Three names attached to three registrations, sourced from the partially public licensing database. The system had nothing to help with this. No shortcut, no cheat code, no magical background-check function. Just a slow internet connection and the methodical patience that Quantico had beaten into me over two years of training.
Badge 4471: Thomas Hargreaves. Registered 1987. Address: Bermondsey. Badge 6203: Donald Firth. Registered 1992. Address: Lambeth. Badge 8819: Jeffrey Hope. Registered 1984. Address: Southwark.
Three names. One of them was a killer.
I pulled up the electoral register — freely accessible online for anyone willing to pay the £2 search fee, which I did with a prepaid Visa card I'd purchased at a post office three weeks ago specifically for digital transactions that I didn't want traced to my real identity.
Hargreaves, Thomas. 62. Married — wife Margaret. Two adult children listed at same address until 2006, then moved out. Still registered to vote as of 2009.
Firth, Donald. 55. Divorced. No dependents at current address. Registered to vote as of 2010.
Hope, Jeffrey. 58. Separated — wife Claire. Two children: Amy (16), James (12). Children registered at wife's address in Greenwich.
My pen stopped over the notepad.
Two children. Teenagers. At his wife's address, not his. Separated, not divorced. Man who lost his family but whose children are still young enough to need support.
That matched the profile. A terminally ill man killing strangers so his children could eat after he died. The motive wasn't revenge or ideology — it was provision. Twisted, monstrous provision, but provision nonetheless.
But Hargreaves had adult children too. And I was working from meta-knowledge that I couldn't use as evidence. The name "Jeff Hope" was already circled in red inside my skull — had been since I'd read it on a couch in Virginia, watching a television show that was now my reality. The challenge was building the case without revealing how I knew.
Think like an analyst, Cole. What can a civilian access that points to terminal illness?
NHS records — sealed. GP records — sealed. Hospital admissions — sealed. The privacy laws that protected every citizen in this country were also protecting a killer, and no amount of social engineering was going to get past them.
But there were other paths.
I opened a new browser tab and navigated to a forum I'd bookmarked two days ago: DrivingWithConditions.co.uk, a support community for commercial drivers dealing with health issues. Anonymised, mostly, but people were careless. They shared details — symptoms, diagnoses, frustrations about licensing requirements. The TfL required medical fitness certificates for cab renewals, and drivers with serious conditions had to declare them or risk losing their badge.
I spent two hours reading forum threads. The search function was crude — no tags, no filtering, just keyword search through post archives dating back to 2004.
Search: "aneurysm" + "driving"
Seven results. Most were from users asking about insurance implications. One, posted eighteen months ago by a user called SouthLondonCab, was different.
"Anyone else dealing with this? Diagnosed 6 months ago. Brain aneurysm. They say inoperable — too deep, too risky. I'm still driving but the headaches are getting worse. Pressure behind my eyes every morning. Doc says I could go any time. Months, maybe a year. TfL doesn't know yet. If I declare, I lose the badge. I can't lose the badge. My kids need the income."
The post had three replies. One sympathetic, one suggesting he contact the Taxi Benevolent Fund, one urging him to declare for everyone's safety.
SouthLondonCab hadn't posted again.
My heart hammered. The coffee was forgotten. The library's fluorescent hum faded to white noise.
Brain aneurysm. South London cab driver. Eighteen months ago — matches Jeff Hope's diagnosis timeline. Kids need the income.
I couldn't trace the IP address. I didn't have the technical skills, and the forum's privacy settings were basic but functional. But the username — SouthLondonCab — combined with the timeline and the medical details narrowed my field considerably.
Cross-reference: Brain aneurysm. Diagnosed approximately January 2009. Still driving as of mid-2009. South London. Children.
Of my three badge numbers, only one matched: Jeffrey Hope.
[Investigation Progress. Suspect correlation strengthened. +8 SP]
I sat back. The plastic chair creaked beneath me — the same chairs that had been in every library, every school, every government building I'd ever entered, designed by someone who believed comfort was a moral weakness.
You already knew it was Hope. The meta-knowledge told you months ago. But now you have a trail — a legitimate, non-magical trail that leads from geographic profiling through public records to a forum post to a name.
Except it's not enough. A forum post from an anonymous user isn't evidence. A geographic profile isn't a warrant. An electoral register entry showing children at a wife's address isn't proof of murder.
I closed the browser. Cleared the history. Gathered my notes.
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Brixton Bedsit — August 2, 2010, 2:30 PM
The corkboard now held three photographs — not licence photos, which weren't public, but screenshots from Google Street View showing the registered addresses of my three suspects. Hargreaves's place in Bermondsey had a tidy front garden and a new-looking car in the driveway. Firth's Lambeth flat was above a kebab shop. Hope's Southwark address was a terraced house on a quiet street, curtains drawn, bins out on the wrong day.
I stared at Hope's house. An ordinary home on an ordinary street. The kind of place you'd walk past without looking twice.
Sandra Mitchell had told me to come back for a follow-up. The thought surfaced from nowhere, like a bubble rising through murky water. Back in April. I'd promised. Four months ago.
I pushed it aside. Not now.
The question was what to do with what I had. I could:
One — call Crimestoppers again. Anonymous tip: "Check cab driver Jeffrey Hope, badge 8819, for connection to the serial suicides." Clear, actionable, potentially case-breaking.
Two — keep investigating independently. Deploy Charlie's network to surveil Hope's cab. Build a physical evidence trail: where he drives, who he picks up, whether the pattern matches the killings.
Three — do nothing. Let Sherlock solve it. The canon outcome — John Watson shooting Hope through a window — was hours or days away. My intervention might change that, might prevent the shooting, might alter the chain of events that cemented the Sherlock-John partnership.
The ethical weight of that third option pressed down like a hand on my chest. Jennifer Wilson was already dead. Four people had been killed. And I was sitting in a bedsit debating whether to let a fifth die because a television show I'd watched demanded a specific sequence of events.
No. No more. The TV show doesn't get to kill real people.
I picked up my phone and called Crimestoppers. Different burner than last time — I'd bought a second one last week, £8 from a market stall in Peckham, specifically for this.
The call connected. Automated menu. I pressed through to the anonymous tip line.
"I have information about the serial suicide case," I said, keeping my voice flat, measured, stripped of accent as much as I could manage. "The killer is a licensed black cab driver. Badge number 8819. Name: Jeffrey Hope. Registered address in Southwark. He has a terminal brain aneurysm and is killing people for money — someone is paying him per victim. Check his cab's GPS logs against the locations and times of the four deaths."
I hung up before the operator could ask questions. Wiped the phone. Removed the SIM card. Snapped it in half.
[Anonymous Tip Filed. Case contribution: Significant. +5 SP]
The broken SIM sat in my palm, two pieces of plastic that might save a life — or might arrive too late to matter. Crimestoppers tips went through a processing queue. Hours, sometimes days, before they reached the right desk.
Sherlock was faster than a processing queue.
I dropped the SIM pieces in the bin, washed my hands, and stood in front of the corkboard.
You've done what you can. Now it's a race between your tip and Sherlock's brain.
My stomach growled — I'd eaten nothing since toast at seven. The mini-fridge offered beans, bread, and a wilting lettuce that had seen better decades. I made beans on toast and ate it standing at the counter, watching the light shift through the bedsit's single window.
Jeff Hope was out there, somewhere in London, driving his cab, looking for his next passenger.
And I'd just put a target on his back from two different directions.
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