Vahh Hotel jo nakshe mai nahi tha...😱
Baarish ki bunde Car ke shishe par iss tarah Girah rahi thi jase koi lagtar darwaja khat khata raha ho Riya ne mobile ki screen per aakhri bar map dekha location saaf dikh rahi thi -Hotel Royal inn lekin samne Jo ghada tha vah Kisi Hotel jaisa nahi lag raha tha ek purani dhundhli teen mazli imarat jiski Aadhi lightein band thi aur sab aur sabse Ajeeb baat yah thi uska naam kahin likha hi nahin tha "yahi hai kya?" Cab driver Ne darte hue pucha riya map dikhaya driver Ne turant gadi aage badha Di "madam...yah jagah theek nahin Hai aap dusri booking kar lo Riya junjala gayi aap jaaiye main dekh lungi gadi Chali gai Ab waha sirf vah thi aur vah imarat hawa achanak thandi ho gai Riya Ne apna bag kandhe per Tanga aur andar Chali gai
Khali reception
Reception per koi nahi tha tab usse ek purani ghanti Rakhi thi vo dikh gayi tabhi usne bajai tin..... Tabhi awaaz pure hall mein fail gai kuchh second baad piche se ek aadami aaya uski chal bahut dhimi thi Jaise har kadam soch kar rakh raha ho "check in ?" Usne Bina Riya ki taraf dekhe Puchha "ha...Riya Sharma... Booking 204 ke liye vah register paltane Laga uski ungaliya bahut thandi thi "aapke liye Kamra 305 hai" kabhi Riya chauki "lekin Maine Kamra 204 book kiya tha" ab pahili bar usne uske taraf dekha uski aakhe... Bilkul Bina bhav ki thi tabhi usne kaha "204 band hai" tabhi Riya puchti Hai "kyon?" "Vahan Koi nahin rahata"
Yah jawab bahut Ajeeb tha lekin Riya thaki hui thi usne chabi li chabi per likha tha 305
Lift Jo apne aap chalti thi
Lift purani thi uske andar sirf ek button chal raha tha 3 tabhi Riya ne Koi button nahin dabaya fir bhi lift upar jaane lagi uska Dil bahut Tej se dhadakne Laga vah bahut jyada dar Gai thi tabhi jab darvaja khula pura floor Khali tha Lamba kyaridor jiske aakhir mein sirf ek darvaja 305 Baki sabhi kamre per Tala laga tha aur unn per dhul Jami thi Jaise salon se Kisi Ne use khola hi nahin tabhi Riya dheere dheere aage badhi uske kadmon ki awaaz khud use Dara rahi thi usne darvaja khola
Kamre ke aandar...
Usne kamre ke andar dekha To Kamra saaf tha per Kamra Ajeeb tarah Se saaf tha Jaise Abhi Abhi Kisi Ne set kiya ho lekin vah bahut thandi thi aur ek Ajeeb Si gandh.... Gili mitti Jaisi tabhi riya Ne bag Rakha aur tabhi uski najar Aayane Par gai aaine par dhundh Jami thi tabhi usne hath se saaf Kiya aur Jaise hi dhundh hati uske hath ruk gai uss per ungaliyon se likha tha "Mat Raho Yaha..." Tabhi Riya piche hat Gai "ye kya hai..." Usne socha Shayad Kisi Ne uske sath majak kiya hoga usne tissue se shisha saaf Kiya ab sab normal tha "Main aur think kar rahi hoon" usne khud se kaha lekin tab thak...thak...thak darwaje par kisine dastak di tabhi Riya ne darwaja khola par bahar koi nahi tha kyaridor puri tarh Khali tha lekin farsh par pani ke nishan the jaise koi gile pehrose abhi Abhi chala ho aur ho nishan kamre ke aandar ki taraf aa rahe the Riya ka to gala pura sukh hi Gaya
Raat ke 3:05
Thakan ke karn voh so gayi lekin aachank se uski aakh khup gayi kamre mai aandhera tha tabhi usne mobile dekha 3:05 AM ussi samay baathroom se pani girne ki aavaj aane lagi tabhi vah dhire dhire uthi aur dekhane chali gayi "Shayad nal khula rah gaya..." Jaise hi usne bathroom ka darvaja khola tabhi nal bandh tha lekin farsh pura gila tha aur aayne me firse likha tha "Bhag jao..." Iss bar likhavt taja thi Jaise Abhi Abhi kisi ne likha hua ho tabhi Riya ne aayne me khud ko dekha lekin aagle hi pal uska Dil ruk gaya tabhi uske piche ek ladki thi... Safed kapde lambe gile baal chehra niche zhuka hua riya palti toh vaha koi nahi tha Riya ne firse aayne mai dekha ab ladki uske bilkul piche khadhi thi aur dhire dhire aapna chehra upar utha rahi thi uske aakhe Puri kali Thi Riya chikhte hue Bahar bhagi bandh floor kyaridor mai akar usne Baki kamron ke darvaje khatkhatae Koi jawab nahi usne lift ka darvaja dabaya left khuli andar vahin reception wala khada tha is bar vah muskura raha tha "mam...aapko kamre se bahar nahin aana chahie tha "vo... Kamre mein Koi Hai vah dhire Se bola han hai Kaun usne jawab nahin diya bus dhire Se kaha vah teen sal se aapka intezar kar rahi thi Riya ka dimag ghoom gaya " kya matlab...?" Lift niche pahunch gai reception per Aakar usne register dekha usmein aakhiri entry thi Kavya Kamra 305-3 sal pahle uske bad Koi Naam nahin Baki log kahan hai riya Ne poochha reception wala bola yah Hotel sirf unke liye Hai jinhen Bulaya jata Hai
Nakshe se Gayab
Subah hote hi Riya hotel se bahar nikali usne socha Main yahan nahin rahungi uske usne samne ki dukaan per jakar kab se hai "yah hotel kab se hai?" Dukandar ne ajib nazron se dekh "kon sa hotel?" Riya ne piche mudkar dekha vahan kuchh nahin tha sirf ek Khali maidan uska Dil jor se dhadkane Laga " nahin... Main To vahin se aayi hu" usne mobile mein photo dekhna chaha lekin hotel ki saari tasavire gayab thi sirf ek photo bachi Thi Kamra 305 ke aaine ki aur us mein Riya Akeli nahin thi uske piche vahi ladki khadi Thi
Aakhri scene (Part -1 ka climax )
Riya bhagate hue wapas use jagah pahunchi ab vah Fir Se vahi Hotel khada tha jaise kabhi Gayab hua hi nahin darvaja apne aap khula reception wala khada tha is bar uski Aankhen Puri Kali Thi usne kaha aap wapas a Gai... ab check out nahin hota Riya piche hatne lagi lekin uske piche darvaja band ho chuka tha aur deewar per Laga aaina apne aap Tut Gaya tute hue aaine ko tukdon mein usse apna chehra nahin dikh raha tha har tukde mein vahi Kali Aankhen wali ladki dikh rahi thi aur ek tukde mein register ki nai entry Riya -Kamra 305
Part 1 samapt
Agar aapko yah pasand aaya ho to agale part mein:
Kavya Kaun Thi.?
204 Main Kya chhupa he
3:05 Ka aasli Rahasya
Hotel asal mein kya hai - jagah ya Jaal