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The car moved smoothly through the city streets, the engine humming quietly beneath them.
Lily watched the buildings pass by outside the window, but her mind wasn't focused on the view.
It was focused on one thing.
Victor Romano.
The name alone felt heavy.
She glanced at Darius again.
He sat beside her, calm and composed, as if tonight was just another routine meeting.
His posture was relaxed, one arm resting casually against the seat while the other held his phone.
But Lily had spent enough time around him now to notice the subtle signs.
His eyes were sharper.
More alert.
Like a predator preparing to step into enemy territory.
"You really think this is a good idea?" Lily asked quietly.
Darius didn't answer immediately.
Instead, he finished typing a message and slipped the phone into his pocket.
Then he turned to her.
"Define good."
Lily frowned.
"You know what I mean."
"No," he said calmly. "I don't."
"You're going to confront the man who just tried to kidnap me."
"Correct."
"And he probably knows you're coming."
"Also correct."
"And you're still going anyway."
Darius gave a faint smile.
"You're starting to understand how this world works."
Lily sighed and leaned back against the seat.
"I think your world is insane."
Marco chuckled from the driver's seat.
"You're not wrong."
The convoy slowed as they approached a large intersection.
Traffic lights painted the streets red and green while the nightlife of the city buzzed around them.
Music drifted through the air from nearby bars and clubs.
But their destination stood out among them all.
A tall building glowing with bright neon lights.
Marco spoke again.
"There it is."
Lily leaned forward slightly, curiosity overcoming her nerves.
A huge sign lit up the entrance.
ROMANO CLUB
Her eyes widened slightly.
"Victor owns a nightclub?"
Darius nodded.
"Several, actually."
"Is that part of the… business?"
"It's part of the money."
The car slowed and finally came to a stop near the entrance.
Two large black SUVs parked behind them.
Men stepped out quietly, scanning the area.
Everything was controlled.
Disciplined.
Efficient.
Marco turned around slightly.
"My men are already inside," he said.
"Good," Darius replied.
Then he opened the car door.
Cold night air rushed in.
The sound of loud music spilled out from the club entrance.
People laughed and chatted in line, completely unaware of the dangerous game unfolding around them.
Darius stepped out first.
Marco followed.
Lily hesitated before stepping out as well.
The bright lights of the club illuminated the street.
People were dressed in expensive clothes, high heels clicking against the pavement while expensive cars pulled up to the entrance.
It looked glamorous.
Normal.
But Lily now understood something important.
Behind that glamour…
Was the mafia.
Darius turned to her.
"Remember the deal."
She crossed her arms.
"I remember."
"Say it."
Lily rolled her eyes slightly.
"I stay in the car."
"Exactly."
Marco smirked.
"You catch on quick."
Lily shot him an annoyed look.
"This isn't funny."
Marco raised his hands defensively.
"Hey, I'm not the one who insisted on coming."
Darius adjusted his coat slightly.
Then his gaze shifted toward the nightclub entrance.
His expression hardened.
"Stay here," he said quietly.
Without another word, he walked toward the club.
Marco and two guards followed him.
The security guards at the entrance immediately stepped aside when they recognized him.
The doors opened.
Then closed.
And just like that—
Darius disappeared inside.
Lily returned to the car slowly.
Her heart was beating faster now.
She sat down and closed the door.
The silence inside the vehicle felt strange after all the noise outside.
She glanced toward the nightclub again.
Bright lights flashed across the building while music pulsed through the walls.
Somewhere inside that club…
Two powerful men were about to face each other.
And she had a terrible feeling it wouldn't end peacefully.
Minutes passed.
Lily checked the time on her phone.
Still nothing.
She sighed and leaned her head back against the seat.
Then suddenly—
Her phone vibrated.
She looked down.
Unknown number.
Her stomach tightened slightly.
Slowly, she opened the message.
You shouldn't have come tonight.
Her heart skipped.
Another message appeared.
Darius Romano isn't the only one being watched.
Lily sat up straighter.
Her eyes moved quickly toward the nightclub entrance.
Had someone seen her?
Was this a joke?
Or something worse?
Her phone vibrated again.
A third message appeared.
Look behind you.
Lily froze.
The air inside the car suddenly felt colder.
Her heartbeat pounded loudly in her ears.
Slowly…
Very slowly…
She turned her head.
And realized—
She was no longer alone in the car.