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📖 Chapter 35: The Day Decisions Became Heavy
Late August 1965 — Pressure Without Announcement
Early Morning — Not Just Another Day
The rooster had not even crowed yet when Akshy opened his eyes.
It wasn't habit this time.
It was unease.
For the past few days, something had been changing—not loudly, not clearly—but steadily.
The kind of change you don't notice in one moment… but can't ignore after a few days.
He stepped outside.
The ground was still slightly wet from earlier rains. The air carried a strange stillness, like something was waiting.
Mahavir was already awake, sitting on the charpai, tying his turban slowly.
"You woke early," Mahavir said without looking up.
Akshy nodded.
"Couldn't sleep properly."
Mahavir glanced at him.
"Thinking?"
Akshy gave a small smile.
"When am I not?"
Mahavir didn't smile back.
Because today—it didn't feel light.
Morning Routine — But Faster
Work started quickly.
Too quickly.
Even the workers seemed less relaxed.
Ramesh arrived, slightly breathless.
"Two traders came early morning," he said.
Mahavir looked up.
"What did they want?"
"To ask about grain," Ramesh replied.
Akshy paused.
"What kind of questions?"
Ramesh thought for a moment.
"They were asking how much we can supply… not how much we want to sell."
That was different.
Akshy nodded slowly.
"Hmm."
Mahavir asked,
"What does that mean?"
Akshy answered calmly,
"They are preparing."
POV: Mahavir — Understanding Slowly
Mahavir had seen markets change before.
But this felt different.
Earlier, traders would argue, delay, negotiate hard.
Now—they were asking about supply.
That meant only one thing:
They expected shortage.
He looked at Akshy.
How did he see this earlier?
Mahavir didn't ask.
But the thought stayed.
Decision — Go to Mandi Immediately
Akshy didn't wait long.
"We go to mandi today," he said.
Mahavir nodded instantly.
No debate.
No delay.
They left within the hour.
Journey — Roads Carry Clues
The road to Kurukshetra told its own story.
More movement.
More carts.
More urgency.
At one point, they saw a group of traders moving together.
Not talking loudly. Not stopping.
Ramesh whispered,
"They look serious."
Akshy replied,
"They already decided."
Ramesh frowned.
"Decided what?"
Akshy looked ahead.
"To act before others."
Mandi — Tension You Can Feel
The moment they entered, it hit them.
The mandi was not loud.
But it was intense.
No wasted movement.
No long conversations.
Deals were happening quickly.
Akshy walked slowly, observing everything.
One trader said sharply,
"Take it now or leave it!"
Another replied,
"I'll take full stock—don't split it!"
That was new.
Key Observation
Akshy noticed something very important.
Big traders were not standing in the open.
They were moving quietly.
Buying in parts.
From different people.
Ramesh asked,
"Why are they not buying openly?"
Akshy replied,
"Because they don't want others to react."
Ramesh blinked.
Then slowly nodded.
Encounter — Suraj Speaks Clearly
This time, Suraj didn't wait or pretend.
He walked straight toward them.
"You came early," he said.
Mahavir replied,
"Had to."
Suraj looked at Akshy.
"You already knew," he said.
Akshy didn't answer directly.
Instead, he asked,
"You're buying?"
Suraj smiled slightly.
"Of course."
Then he leaned a little closer and said quietly,
"This is just the start."
That line carried weight.
Mahavir asked,
"What do you mean?"
Suraj looked at him, then at Akshy.
"Within days… everything will move faster."
Then he stepped back.
"Don't stay behind."
And walked away.
Midday — Big Decision Moment
They stood still for a few seconds after that.
Then Mahavir said,
"What do we do?"
Akshy answered immediately:
"We buy."
No hesitation.
But not blindly.
Step-by-Step Buying
They didn't rush to one seller.
Instead:
Checked 4–5 different stocks
Compared quality
Bought in parts
Ramesh kept track.
"How much total?" he asked.
Akshy replied,
"Enough for now."
Mahavir added,
"Not more than we can store safely."
That balance again.
Transport — Real Problem Appears
Getting the grain back became difficult.
Road had worsened again.
At one point, a wheel got stuck deep in mud.
Ramesh sighed loudly,
"This is wasting time!"
Mahavir and Akshy both pushed.
It took effort.
Real effort.
Finally, the cart moved.
Akshy said quietly,
"This is why local supply wins."
Mahavir nodded.
Now he truly understood.
Afternoon — Rice Mill Under Pressure
When they reached Nissing, work was already ongoing.
Machine running.
Workers moving fast.
But something felt off.
Ramesh noticed first.
"Output quality dropped again."
Akshy checked.
Yes—too many broken grains.
He walked to the machine.
Adjusted the flow.
"Reduce input speed," he said.
Worker replied,
"Then output will be less."
Akshy said firmly,
"Quality first."
This time—no one argued.
POV: Worker — Silent Respect
The worker had seen many people run machines.
Most shouted.
Most rushed.
But this one—
Spoke less.
Observed more.
And somehow—
Got better results.
The worker shook his head slightly.
"Different kind of owner…"
Evening — Poultry Becomes Real Income
At the poultry site, Harbans was waiting again.
"85 eggs today," he said proudly.
Mahavir smiled slightly.
That was real.
Daily output.
Daily income.
Akshy checked everything again.
Then said,
"Start planning next batch."
Harbans asked,
"How many?"
Akshy replied,
"150 this time."
Mahavir didn't object.
Now he trusted the pace.
Night — Family Faces Reality
That night, the atmosphere was serious.
No casual talk.
Mahavir spoke first.
"Market is not normal anymore."
Savitri looked up.
"How much change?"
Akshy replied,
"Enough to matter."
Shanti asked,
"Is it dangerous?"
Akshy paused.
Then said,
"It can be."
Silence filled the room.
Clear Strategy (Explained Properly)
Akshy spoke slowly.
"We don't panic."
They listened.
"We prepare."
Then he explained:
Store grain carefully
Sell in parts, not all at once
Expand poultry step by step
Keep dairy stable (no risk there)
Mahavir asked,
"Why not sell everything at high price?"
Akshy answered,
"Because price will not stay fixed."
Savitri wrote quickly.
Now she was not just writing—
She was understanding.
Late Night — Radio Confirms It
The radio crackled again.
"…border tensions rising…"
"…military movement increased…"
No one spoke.
Because now—
It wasn't rumor.
It was direction.
POV: Suraj — Rival Turns Watcher
That night, Suraj sat alone.
He had also bought.
Also prepared.
But one thing bothered him.
Akshy moved earlier.
Not by luck.
By understanding.
Suraj smiled slightly.
"This won't be simple anymore…"
Final Scene — Akshy Alone
Akshy stepped outside one last time.
The road was not empty.
Two trucks passed.
Late night movement.
Unusual.
He watched quietly.
No fear.
No excitement.
Just clarity.
"Now… it begins," he whispered.
Closing
By the end of August:
Grain storage increased
Rice mill stabilized
Poultry giving daily income
Market shifting rapidly
Everything was ready.
Not perfect.
But prepared.
Because what was coming next—
Would not give time to think.
Only time to act.
📖 End of Chapter 35