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The Mistakes That Killed Me… One by One

Shrikrishna_Swain
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He wanted to fix his mistakes… but every correction made things worse. When Krishna discovers a mysterious diary listing every mistake of his life, he decides to change his fate. But instead of fixing his future… it starts destroying it. Trapped in a deadly loop where every choice leads to disaster, Krishna must uncover the truth behind the diary— before his final mistake erases him completely.
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Chapter 1 - “The Mistakes That Killed Me… One by One”

📖 Chapter 1: The First Mistake

Ek ladka tha…

Krishna.

17 saal ka.

Aur apni life ki har galti se pareshan.

Usse hamesha lagta tha —

"Kaash main apni mistakes theek kar pata…"

Ek din… sab badal gaya.

Usse apne room me ek ajeeb si diary mili.

Black cover.

Koi naam nahi.

Usne dheere se khola.

Pehli line likhi thi—

"List of Your Mistakes"

Krishna ke haath kaanp gaye.

Page palta.

Usme uski har galti likhi thi…

Woh bhi jo kisi ko pata nahi thi.

"Yeh… kaise possible hai…?"

💀 Mistake #1:

"You trusted the wrong person."

Krishna ko turant samajh aa gaya —

yeh uske best friend ke baare me tha.

Usne decide kiya…

is baar woh apni galti sudhaarega.

Agla din.

Usne apne friend se distance bana liya.

Sab kuch control me lag raha tha.

Lekin…

Shaam ko ek phone aaya.

"Accident ho gaya hai…"

Krishna ka dil sunk gaya.

Woh hospital pahucha…

lekin der ho chuki thi.

Uska best friend… ab zinda nahi tha.

Krishna ka dimaag blank ho gaya.

"Main toh galti sudhar raha tha…

phir yeh kyun hua…?"

Us raat woh darr ke saath so gaya.

Subah…

Woh phir se utha.

Same time.

Same date.

Sab kuch same.

Usne turant diary uthayi.

Naya message likha tha—

"Mistake #2: You tried to change the past."

Krishna ka saans ruk gaya.

"Yeh diary… past change karne ke liye nahi hai…"

Tabhi diary ke last page par ek nayi line ubhri—

"I don't fix your past…"

"…I create your future."

Krishna peeche hata.

"Yeh… kya cheez hai…?"

Tabhi—

Ek tez horn ki awaaz…

Krishna ne mudkar dekha—

Ek truck seedha uski taraf aa raha tha.....phir...