I want to thank everyone for reading up to Chapter Seven so far. We've just finished the emotional reunion between Kuroka and Koneko, Lucien has awakened his dormant Shadow powers, and the political board is starting to move with the betrothal talks looming. I hope the mix of action, family healing, training, and intrigue has been enjoyable so far.
I'd love to hear some feedback from you, awesome readers.
How are you feeling about the story so far?
Are you enjoying Lucien's more calculated, shadow-oriented approach compared to the usual "overpowered protagonist blasts everything" style?
Most importantly:
Is there anything that you want to see in future chapters?
• More training and magic development?
• Deeper exploration of Lucien's Shadow powers?
• More interactions between Lucien and his growing peerage (especially Kuroka)?
• More focus on the betrothal situation with Albedo and Esdeath?
• More slice-of-life moments with Rias, Akeno, Kuroka, Grayfia, etc.
• Bigger action scenes or political scheming?
• Or something else entirely?
Feel free to drop your thoughts in the comments. Your feedback genuinely helps shape the story's direction.
Thank you again for reading and supporting the fic.
Next chapter drops soon.