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System of Punishment: Rebirth in Another World

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Rebirth. Power. Punishment. ::Jab Pankaj mara… kahani khatam nahi hui— wo shuru hui.:: ∆Ek anjaan duniya me janm lekar usse mila ek dangerous System, jo use har jeet ke saath shakti deta hai… aur har galti par saza bhi।∆ "Gaav se shehar tak, chhoti ladai se clan war tak— har kadam par maut khadi hai।" "Dost kam… dushman zyada… aur sabse bada sawaal— ****Kya Pankaj system ko control karega… ya system use?**** **Ye kahani hai survival ki, revenge ki… aur dheere-dheere monster banne ki।
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Chapter 1 - System of Punishment: Rebirth in Another World

Chapter 1: Maut ke Baad Shuruaat

Raat ka time tha।

Shehar ki sadak pe tez baarish ho rahi thi।

Pankaj apni bike se ghar ja raha tha। Uska dimaag already gusse aur frustration se bhara hua tha।

"Zindagi me kuch bhi sahi nahi ho raha…"

wo dheere se bola।

Tabhi achanak—

🚨 TRUCK!!!

Ek tez roshni uski aankhon me padi…

aur agle hi pal—

DHADAAAM!!!

Sab kuch khatam ho gaya।

⚫ Andhera…

Pankaj ne apni aankhen kholi।

"Main… zinda hoon?"

Uske aas-paas sirf andhera tha। Na zameen, na aasman।

Tabhi ek thandi aur bhayanak awaaz gunji—

"Tumhari zindagi samaapt ho chuki hai…"

Pankaj ka dil tez dhadakne laga।

"Kaun hai?!"

Awaaz fir aayi—

"Tumhe ek dusra mauka diya ja raha hai… lekin ek shart ke saath…"

🔥 SYSTEM ACTIVATED

Achanak uske saamne ek blue screen chamki—

[System of Punishment Activated]

Host: Pankaj

Level: 1

Rank: F

Special Ability: Punishment Authority (Locked)

Mission:

→ Dushton ko saza do

→ Nyay sthapit karo

→ Apni shakti badhao

Reward: EXP, Skills, Evolution

Punishment Failure: Death

Pankaj shock me tha।

"Ye… game hai kya?!"

Achanak uska sharir halka hua…

aur wo girne laga—

"AAAAAAAHHHH!!!"

DHAM!

Wo zameen pe gira।

Usne aankhen kholi…

Samne ek ajeeb jungle tha।

Bade-bade ped, laal rang ke aasman… aur door se ajeeb awaazein।

👹 Grrrrrrrr…

Pankaj ne mudkar dekha—

Ek khunkhaar janwar uski taraf aa raha tha।

Uski aankhen laal thi, daant bade aur khoon se bhare hue।

System fir se flash hua—

[Warning!]

Enemy Detected: Blood Fang Beast

Level: 3

Tip: Kill to gain EXP

Pankaj ka gala sukh gaya।

"Level 3… aur main Level 1…"

Janwar dheere-dheere uski taraf badhne laga।

"Main mar jaunga…"

Phir achanak uske dimaag me system ki line ghoomi—

"Punishment Failure: Death"

Pankaj ki aankhon me ek alag hi chamak aa gayi।

"Marna hi hai… to ladke marunga!"

Wo uth khada hua।

Beast ne zor se jump kiya—

Pankaj ne side me dodge kiya… mushkil se।

"Fast hai ye!!"

Usne zameen se ek pathar uthaya…

aur poori taqat se beast ke sir pe mara।

THAAAK!!!

Beast gusse me garaj utha।

👹 "GRAAAAAAAH!!!"

Wo seedha Pankaj par toot pada—

⚡ System Reaction

Achanak—

[Skill Unlocked]

Basic Instinct (Level 1)

→ Reaction Speed +10%

Pankaj ka sharir khud hi move karne laga।

Wo jhuk gaya… aur beast ka attack miss ho gaya!

"Ye kya tha?!"

Is baar Pankaj ne chance nahi diya।

Usne ek tez lakdi uthai…

aur beast ke gale me ghusa di—

CHHAAA!!!

Khoon uchhal gaya।

Beast zor se chillaaya… aur dheere-dheere gir gaya।

🟢 LEVEL UP!

[Enemy Defeated]

+50 EXP

[Level Up!]

Level 2 Reached

Stats Increased

Pankaj zor-zor se saans lene laga…

Uske chehre pe khoon tha… par aankhon me dar nahi—

Junoon tha.

Achanak system fir se flash hua—

[Hidden Quest Triggered]

"First Punishment"

→ Nazdeeki gaav me ek atyachaari daku rehta hai

→ Uska naam: Raghu

Objective: Punish Him

Reward: Rare Skill

Failure: Death

Pankaj halka sa muskuraaya…

"Lagta hai asli game ab start hua hai…"

Door jungle ke paar…

ek gaav ki roshni jal rahi thi।

Aur wahan…

Raghu Daku uska intezaar kar raha tha।

🔥 Chapter 1 End