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ONE MISTAKE AWAY PART ONE

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Chapter 1 - ONE MISTAKE AWAY PART ONE

Part 1 – Chapter 1: The

‎Unexpected Stay

‎The late afternoon sun hung low over the crowded rooftops of Ikeja, Lagos, casting a warm orange glow through the half-open blinds of their modest three-bedroom flat. The ceiling fan spun lazily overhead, clicking every few seconds in the humid air. Zion sat hunched on the old brown couch, laptop balanced on his knees, headphones clamped tight over his ears. Premiere Pro was open, the timeline filled with fresh clips he had shot the previous weekend: chaotic morning traffic at Oshodi, a street vendor roasting boli and groundnuts by the roadside, golden-hour shots of the Third Mainland Bridge, and random people going about their day. His YouTube channel, "celedit", had just crossed 1,400 active subscribers — not massive, but steady growth from consistent Lagos street vlogs and short montages. Every new like or comment felt like a small win in the noisy city. Editing was his escape. No family noise, no drama — just him controlling the cuts, the colors, the story.The front door clicked open. Then came the laughter — light, feminine, carrying that familiar mix of Pidgin and Yoruba lilt."She don land o!" his mother announced from the narrow hallway, her voice bright but edged with that usual "abeg make una behave" tone. Mama Zion worked as a senior admin officer at a bank in Victoria Island. She left the house by 6:15 a.m. most mornings, battling traffic, and returned drained by 8 or 9 p.m., sometimes later if NEPA took the light and she had to wait for the generator.Zion yanked off his headphones. His stomach tightened. Naomi.His half-sister. Same absent father, different mothers. She was coming to stay for the full two months while her own mum went for mandatory training in Abuja. The last time they had proper contact was Christmas last year, and it ended badly — she accused him of being selfish for refusing to help edit her final-year project video; he called her a bossy "Madam Know-It-All." Since then, it had been awkward "hi" messages and radio silence.He didn't want her here. The flat already felt cramped with just him and Mama.Naomi stepped into the living room, dragging a medium-sized suitcase behind her and a backpack slung over one shoulder. The heat outside had made her simple white tank top cling to her full, round breasts, the thin straps digging slightly into her smooth caramel skin. Her denim shorts rode high on her thick, soft thighs, and her fresh braids fell just past her shoulders, smelling of coconut oil and shea butter. She looked around the familiar room — cream walls with a few family photos of people who barely spoke to each other, the small flat-screen TV on its wooden stand, the old couch — then her eyes met Zion's for a brief second."Hey, Zion," she said softly, almost guarded.He gave one nod, eyes already flicking back to his screen. "Hey."Cold. Short. The wall went up instantly.Mama clapped her hands once. "Naomi, your room is the guest one at the end. Drop your bag. Dinner go soon ready — I made jollof rice and chicken, extra for you. Welcome back, my daughter."The first five days were tense and awkward. Every morning Mama would wake at 5:30 a.m., prepare a quick breakfast (usually bread with eggs or pap with akara from the night before), shout "Make una no kill each other before I come back o!" from the door, and leave by 6:15 a.m. for the long trek to Victoria Island. Zion would wake later, heat up whatever was left, then bury himself in editing until evening. Naomi tried to bridge the gap. She asked about his "celedit" channel, what new videos he was planning, even mentioning she liked his latest short on Lagos street food. She offered to help with chores or cook small things. Zion answered in grunts and one-word replies. She eventually stopped pushing hard and kept to herself — watching Netflix on her phone in the guest room with the volume low or helping Mama in the kitchen when she returned exhausted.One Thursday evening Mama came home earlier than usual, tired from the endless traffic jam on Third Mainland Bridge. She forced the issue while the jollof was still steaming on the stove in the tiny kitchen."Dinner is ready. Both of you, come and eat. And abeg, settle whatever quarrel una get. This house is too small for silent treatment every day."Zion muttered under his breath as he passed Naomi in the narrow corridor, their shoulders brushing, her breast lightly grazing his arm. "I no get anything to talk."Naomi's voice was low and sharp. "You no dey decide that one alone, Zion."They ate in near silence — spoons scraping plates, the fan blowing warm air, Mama trying to make small talk about bank politics and how NEPA had taken light again in her office area. Under the table, Naomi's bare foot accidentally touched Zion's ankle. Neither pulled away immediately. The contact lingered a second longer than necessary.