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the message from the dark

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Chapter 1 - the message

The rain never truly stopped in Prague; it only changed its mood, sometimes whispering against the rooftops, sometimes striking the ancient cobblestones with a quiet violence that made the entire city feel alive and watchful, and on the night everything unraveled, it carried a strange heaviness, as if the air itself remembered something no one else did, and Lukas Novak sat alone in his dim apartment near the Vltava River, staring at a notebook he hadn't written in for months, his thoughts circling the same memory he tried to bury ever since that winter night when the river had almost taken him, or perhaps had taken something from him, something no doctor, no friend, not even his younger sister Eliska could quite understand, because after that accident Lukas had changed—quieter, distant, as if part of him had been left behind beneath the dark waters near Charles Bridge where the current was strongest and the legends whispered of souls that never left, and though his best friend Marek joked about it at first, saying Lukas had just become "weird" after nearly drowning, even he had started avoiding him after Lukas began talking about dreams—dreams where he stood at the bottom of the river, watching people walk above him, unable to scream, unable to move, just waiting, always waiting, and on that particular evening, when the clock read 9:17 PM and the rain traced slow lines down his window, his phone buzzed with a message from an unknown number, "You shouldn't be alive," and at first Lukas assumed it was a prank, maybe Marek trying to scare him again, but something about the timing, the exact stillness of the room, made his chest tighten, and when he replied "Who is this?" the answer came instantly, "Check the bridge," and though logic told him to ignore it, curiosity mixed with a strange, familiar dread pulled him out into the rain, past empty streets and flickering lamps, until he reached the silent stretch of the bridge where the statues loomed like witnesses carved in stone, their dark forms dripping with rainwater, and his phone buzzed again, "Look down," and against every instinct he stepped forward and peered into the black river below, expecting only darkness, but instead he saw a face staring back—not reflected but rising from beneath the surface, pale, unmoving, unmistakably his own, and he stumbled back in horror, memories crashing into him—the freezing water, the slip, the moment he had fallen months ago, the feeling of being dragged downward by something unseen, something that hadn't wanted to let go, and his phone vibrated again, "That's where you were supposed to stay," and his hands trembled as he typed, "What do you want?" and the reply came slower this time, as if whatever was answering him was thinking, "Balance," and as the rain intensified, a figure appeared at the far end of the bridge, walking toward him with slow, deliberate steps, and Lukas felt a cold certainty settle in his chest before the figure even reached the light, because deep down he already knew what he would see, and when it stepped closer, revealing his own face—identical but drained of life, eyes hollow and fixed—he felt something inside him begin to break, and the figure spoke in his voice, though distorted, as if filtered through water, "You weren't meant to leave," and Lukas shook his head, backing away, insisting, "I survived," but the figure tilted its head slightly, almost with pity, and replied, "No, you were taken, and then you were returned… incomplete," and the river below roared louder, as if reacting to the truth being spoken aloud, and Lukas's thoughts spiraled as he remembered the hospital, the way doctors said his heart had stopped briefly, the way Eliska had cried beside his bed, the way Marek had joked about him being "back from the dead," and suddenly those words didn't feel like jokes anymore, and his phone slipped from his hand, clattering against the stone as another message appeared on its glowing screen, "Come back," and the figure stepped closer, rain passing through it unnaturally, as if it wasn't entirely there, "There are rules," it continued, "when something crosses the line between life and death, it leaves a space behind, and something must fill that space," and Lukas's voice cracked as he asked, "What are you?" and the answer came without hesitation, "I'm what you left behind," and for a moment the world seemed to hold its breath, the rain softening, the river stilling, and then everything surged at once—the wind, the water, the fear—and Lukas turned and ran, his footsteps echoing loudly as he raced across the bridge, past the silent statues that now seemed to watch him with something closer to awareness, their shadows stretching unnaturally long, and behind him he could hear footsteps that matched his own, perfectly timed, perfectly paced, and when he risked a glance back, the figure was still there, walking, not running, yet somehow never falling behind, and his lungs burned as he reached the end of the bridge and stumbled into the empty street, where the lights flickered and buzzed, casting strange, broken shadows, and for a brief second he thought he had escaped, that whatever had followed him was bound to the river, but then his phone buzzed in his pocket, even though he was certain he had dropped it, and with shaking hands he pulled it out to see a new message, "You can run," followed by another, "but you can't leave," and as he looked up, the street no longer looked familiar, the buildings warped slightly, windows dark and empty, no sound of cars, no distant voices, just silence, heavy and unnatural, and when he turned back toward where the bridge should have been, he found only darkness and endless water stretching into nothing, and panic gripped him as he stepped closer, realizing the city itself had changed, or perhaps he had, and beneath the surface of that impossible river, dozens of faces stared upward—still, pale, waiting—and among them, slowly emerging, was his own reflection, not above him but below, trapped, watching, and suddenly he understood the truth he had been avoiding since that winter night, that he had never truly left the river, that whatever had climbed out and continued living his life was only a fragment, a mistake, something that didn't belong, and the final message appeared on his screen, "It's time," and the world seemed to tilt as the ground beneath him dissolved into darkness, pulling him downward, back into the cold, into the silence, into the place where unfinished things waited, and far above, for just a moment, the figure that wore his face stood alone on the edge, watching, before turning away and disappearing into the rain-soaked streets of Prague, leaving no trace behind, because by morning, the city would continue as it always did, indifferent and unchanged, and no one—not Eliska, not Marek, not anyone—would remember that Lukas Novak had ever come back from the river at all.