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Naruto: Suna's Shinigami

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A travelling puppeteer gets lost in a sandstorm while traversing the Land of Wind. Having been diverted, he stumbles across something strange. This story start a little slow... I want to show character growth so you gonna get proper action after a long slice of life type start
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Chapter 1 - Lost in a sandstorm

The desert didn't roar before it killed you.

It waited until you stopped paying attention.

A gust that blurred the horizon. A heat shimmer that made distance lie. A ridge that looked like another ridge until you walked into the wrong one and realized the land had no intention of helping you.

Jogen Tsunemori was at the back of the caravan when it happened.

Not because he was slow.

Because he liked the back.

To him, the front belonged to those who believed the world was a straight road. The back belonged to people who knew better—people who watched for wheel wobble, loose lashings, and the kind of "small problems" that turned into bodies if ignored.

He listened to the caravan the way you listened to a room you didn't trust.

The rhythm of wheels. The pitch of iron on grit. The soft complaint of leather straps under weight. He could hear when a load shifted before anyone saw it. He could smell when a waterskin had begun to leak before it was empty.

Ahead, the caravan leader raised a hand.

"Wind's turning!" Kenta shouted. "Close up!"

Jogen lifted his eyes toward the horizon.

A smudge.

Brown and rising.

The caravan didn't panic yet.

It rarely did at first.

Men squinted and shrugged. A few laughed like the desert had never made fools out of them before. Someone in the middle carts cracked a joke about "Suna winds" and how they always sounded worse than they were. Another man spat and tightened a strap anyway—silent, practical, and suddenly very interested in his knots.

Jogen watched the smudge the way you watched a predator's ears disappear into tall grass.

It wasn't the size that bothered him.

It was the shape.

It wasn't drifting.

It was coming.

The air shifted pressure against his skin—subtle, then less subtle. It stopped feeling like wind and started feeling like a hand pressing against the side of his face. Sand began to lift at ground level, not in playful gusts but in low sheets that slid forward like fog.

The horses felt it before the men did. One tossed its head and huffed hard, whites showing. Another stamped and refused to step for a second too long, like it was arguing with instinct.

Up front, Kenta barked something to the lead guards. There was a quick answer—muffled, clipped—and then Kenta's voice came back tighter. The kind of tight you heard when someone didn't want to admit they were late.

The smudge grew taller. Darker.

The sky above it dulled, as if someone had smeared ash across the sun.

Grit began to tick against wood. Light at first—like rain that couldn't commit. Then heavier. Then constant.

Jogen tasted sand.

Not from the ground.

From the air.

He didn't swear.

He just said, calm and flat, "Rope the carts."

Kenta turned halfway. "What?"

"Rope them together. Now."

There was no panic in Jogen's voice. Just certainty. The kind that didn't ask permission. Something in it made Kenta hesitate only a breath before nodding.

"Do it!" Kenta barked. "Tie the lines! Front to back—no gaps!"

Men scrambled. Thick rope was looped between carts. Knots tightened with shaking hands. Scarves were pulled up. Hoods went over heads. Someone dropped a coil of rope and had to fumble it up again with fingers already stiffening from grit. A merchant started praying under his breath like the sky could hear him through sand.

A younger guard laughed nervously. "It's not that bad—"

Jogen cut him off without raising his voice.

"If you can see the sky clearly, it's already that bad."

The guard's smile died. The wind answered for Jogen, rising another notch, lifting sand at their feet like smoke.

Kenta shouted again, voice hardening. "Hands on the line! Nobody breaks formation!"

The first hard gust hit—strong enough to make a cart creak and a horse sidestep. It wasn't the storm yet.

Just the storm's hand reaching out to see if it could grab them.

Then it grabbed.

The storm arrived like a wall.

The world dissolved into sand.

Visibility collapsed to arm's length. The sun vanished. Sound fractured into muffled shouts and the violent rattle of wood. Sand hit like thrown grit, stinging skin raw, finding every seam where cloth met flesh. It filled ears, glued itself to sweat, worked into eyelashes until blinking felt like scraping glass.

Breathing became a decision you had to make carefully.

Jogen wrapped his scarf tighter across his mouth and grabbed the rope line with both hands.

"Stay low!" he shouted. "Breathe through cloth! Don't run!"

The rope jerked as carts shifted.

A horse screamed—high, terrified.

Someone cursed, voice shredded by wind.

Then the rope pulled sideways so hard it nearly tore his grip loose.

Jogen didn't fight it like a fool. He braced, feet digging in, body angled, letting his weight become an anchor. The rope bit into his palms. Heat flared where fibers dragged skin raw. He moved hand over hand along the line, pushing forward through the storm's blind shove.

The rope jumped again.

A cart groaned—wood under stress.

Jogen followed the violence like it was pointing.

He found the problem by feel.

A horse had gone down.

Not dead—panicked. Legs tangled, thrashing blind. The animal kicked at shadows, hooves striking rope and air and anything within reach. A cart behind it tipped dangerously, load shifting with a slow, nauseating groan that made Jogen's gut tighten. If it rolled, it would drag the rope. If it dragged the rope, it would drag everything connected to it.

A guard was there, half-crouched, hands shaking around a knife.

"I'll cut it!"

"Don't," Jogen snapped.

The guard froze like he'd been struck.

"If you cut that line," Jogen said, voice sharp enough to punch through the wind, "we lose everyone."

"I can't see!"

"Then listen." Jogen grabbed the man's wrist, steadying it. "Cut the harness. Not the main line. Only the harness."

He shoved his knife into the guard's hand.

"Slow," he ordered. "Feel for it. Don't guess."

The guard swallowed hard and obeyed.

Jogen stepped into the storm toward the horse.

He moved without hesitation, hands sliding through rope and muscle, ignoring the violent kicks. A hoof struck his shoulder—hard, blunt pain that flashed white behind his eyes.

He grunted but didn't retreat.

"Easy," he muttered to the animal through grit and wind. "You're not dying today."

He found the harness strap by touch—leather, tighter than rope, slick with sweat. He shoved fingers under it, hauled it free of the knot, and—

The harness snapped.

The horse surged upright and bolted into the storm, vanishing like it had never existed.

For half a breath, the caravan steadied.

Wheels stopped skidding. The rope line stopped trying to rip people out of place. The carts settled into a rough alignment.

A voice yelled somewhere in the haze—"Hold—hold—don't let it—!"

Then something heavier shifted up front.

A cart lost its angle. A load slid. A wheel hit something buried under moving sand.

The rope line didn't snap immediately.

It shuddered—a violent, ugly vibration that ran down the fibers into Jogen's hands like a warning pulse.

Wood groaned.

A horse screamed again, closer, sharp enough to cut through cloth.

"Hold it—HOLD IT!" Kenta's voice came through the storm in torn pieces.

The rope yanked hard enough to lift Jogen's heels an inch off the ground. He dug in, body angled, letting his own cart behind him take some of the pull. The fibers bit deeper into his palms. Heat flared. Skin peeled.

He pushed forward anyway, hand over hand, toward the sound.

"Kenta!" he shouted—less a call for help than an anchor he refused to let go of.

A shape appeared ahead.

A cart.

Or the idea of one.

A darker blur pushing through the storm, its outline wobbling as if the air couldn't decide what it was seeing.

Jogen lunged toward it.

The wind shifted.

The blur slid sideways like it was on rails and dissolved into nothing.

Not because it wasn't there—

Because the storm ate distance and replaced it with lies.

The rope line went slack for half a breath.

Slack was worse than pull.

Slack meant the line had either found peace—

or lost itself.

Jogen's grip tightened until his knuckles hurt.

Then the slack became a whip.

A single, brutal crack—the kind you felt more than heard.

The rope snapped.

Not a clean break.

A tearing failure.

The loose end lashed across the air and slapped his forearm, stinging through cloth. Fibers sprayed like split hair. For an instant, the broken end flicked in front of his face—close enough to grab.

He reached.

His fingers brushed it.

And the wind ripped it away like it had never belonged to him.

"Kenta!" he shouted again.

This time, the storm didn't just swallow the name.

It broke it into sand.

Somewhere ahead, something moved—fast, heavy.

A wheel striking stone? A horse bolt? A man running?

It could've been any of them.

It could've been none.

Jogen turned in place, eyes narrowed to slits, forcing vision through pain.

A silhouette blinked into existence for a heartbeat—tall, human, arm raised like a signal.

He stepped toward it.