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Emberborn Rising

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Evan Arclight (Earth age: 17; Reincarnated age: 20) Formerly a quiet, introspective boy who died saving a child from an oncoming truck. Reborn in Asterion by a goddess. Join Evan as he dives into a world of magic and intrigue. Destiny chose him but what if he could overrule destiny? Fate applies to normal people, not the Emberborn. ***Hi all, I was not a fan of how my first novel read back to me so here I'm trying again. Please feel free to comment suggestions, I try to answer all of them.***
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1- The Moment the World Shifted

Evan always imagined death would be quiet.

He didn't imagine screeching tires, a child's scream, and the sharp crack of pain that split the world like a lightning strike. He didn't remember falling—but he remembered the way he pushed the boy aside, throwing all his weight into that one desperate act.

Then darkness.

Then… something else.

A warm breeze washed over him. Soft grass tickled his palms. When he opened his eyes, a sky of impossible colors stretched above—a sunrise painted in gold and violet, its hues shifting like a living tapestry.

He wasn't in a hospital.

He wasn't anywhere close to the world he knew.

He sat up sharply. His body felt… stronger. Older. Lean muscle where softness had been. Hands larger, surer. His reflection shimmered in a nearby pool, and a stranger stared back—his features sharpened, eyes glowing faintly with a flicker of red.

A voice reached him.

"Rise, Emberborn."

He spun around.

A woman stood before him—a being of impossible beauty, her skin luminous like a lantern flame behind silk. Her hair drifted like fire under water, her eyes bright as molten gold.

He knew instinctively this wasn't a human.

"Are… are you an angel?" he asked.

She smiled warmly. "Close. I am Aurelia, goddess of rebirth and light. And you, Evan Arclight… have died."

The words should have crushed him.

Instead, he felt a quiet peace.

"How long?" he whispered.

"In your world? Moments. In mine? Time flows differently."

He swallowed. "The boy I saved—?"

"Lives," she said gently. "Because you made a choice that eclipsed fear. And because your soul shone so brilliantly in its final heartbeat… I chose you."

His pulse quickened. "Chose me for what?"

"For this."

The world trembled. A ring of runic symbols ignited around him. Information surged into his mind—not painful, but overwhelming, like a wave of pure light.

[CRUCIBLE OF SOULS INITIALIZED]

Designation:Evan Arclight

Class: Emberborn Initiate

Age: 20

Concept Seed:IGNITION

Affinity: Fire/Life (Hybrid: Primordial Ember)

Evan staggered back. "What—what is this?! Some kind of RPG system?"

Aurelia's smile widened. "If that is the language your soul understands… yes. A system. A guide. A destiny."

"But why me?"

"Because Asterion is dying," she said softly. "The balance of magic is collapsing. And a darkness older than kingdoms stirs beneath the Obsidian Wastes."

The air chilled despite her radiant form.

"You carry the spark that can save this world… or end it."

Evan shivered. "I'm not a hero."

"You already were," Aurelia said. "You just didn't realize it."

She reached out, placing her hand over his heart. Warmth flooded him.

"Now go. This world awaits your flame."

Light engulfed him.

When it faded, Aurelia was gone.

And Evan stood alone in a vast emerald forest, birdsong echoing above and mist rising from the loam. Far away, a river roared like a promise.

A breeze whispered through the trees.

Then a new sound broke the peace.

An arrow hissed past his head.

Evan dove behind a fallen log just as another arrow thudded into the earth beside him.

A voice rang out—sharp, commanding, and decidedly annoyed.

"Show yourself, outsider! No one trespasses in the territory of Eldrathar!"

Evan peeked over the log.

A woman stood on a branch high above—a silhouette against the golden dawn. Long silver hair swayed behind her, and her bow was drawn with perfect, lethal calm. Her emerald eyes locked onto him.

An elf.

A very irritated, breathtakingly skilled elf.

Evan raised his hands slowly. "H-hey! I'm unarmed! I literally got here five minutes ago!"

Her eyes narrowed. "You lie poorly, human."

"I swear I'm not—"

She leapt from the tree, landing silently before him, blade already at his throat. Her movements were too graceful to be anything but supernatural.

"State your name," she demanded.

"…Evan. Evan Arclight."

"And your purpose in this forest?"

He hesitated. "Surviving?"

Her glare softened a fraction. "You are either the worst spy ever sent… or the most clueless fool alive."

"I'm voting for clueless," he muttered.

She sheathed her blade. "Very well. You will come with me. Our seer will decide your fate."

"Fate?" Evan squeaked. "Wait, hold on—what if I say no?"

The elf smirked. "Then I shoot you in the leg and carry you."

"…Lead the way."

And so, under a canopy of shifting sunlight, Evan took his first uneasy steps into the world of Asterion—unaware that this sharp-eyed ranger, Lyriana Vaelwyn, would soon become the first of many who would walk beside him…

And the first to spark feelings he never expected.

The world opened before him like a flame waiting to ignite.

And Evan—reborn, uncertain, and destined—stepped into adventure.

The forest seemed to breathe around him.

Evan walked behind Lyriana as she navigated the trees like someone who had spent her entire life inside them—because she had. She moved with a hunter's silence, feet barely touching the moss, her silver hair reflecting the early morning light like strands of moonlit water.

Evan, meanwhile, stumbled over a root for the third time.

Lyriana didn't even look back. "You walk like a wounded boar."

"I didn't exactly grow up in an enchanted forest," he muttered.

"Clearly."

Her tone wasn't harsh—just… dry, like she expected competence from anyone in her presence. And yet, she slowed her pace slightly, enough that Evan could keep up without tripping again.

Small victories, he thought.

Birdsong echoed through the towering emerald boughs. Pollen drifted like golden dust motes. Far off, crystalline deer watched curiously before darting behind trees that shimmered with faint magical runes.

"This place is beautiful," Evan said quietly.

Lyriana didn't answer for several steps. Then:

"It is sacred. And dangerous. Not all who enter leave."

"Comforting."

"There is nothing comforting here," she said. "Only truth."

Evan wasn't sure if that was poetic or just ominous.

They walked for nearly an hour before the forest shifted. The trees grew taller, their trunks twisting together until they formed natural arches. Blue-white lights drifted through the air like floating fireflies.

Ahead, a wooden spire rose from the earth—grown, not built—its roots spiraling upward like braided pillars. At its crown glowed a pale blue gem.

Lyriana stopped. "The Seer's Spire."

Evan followed her gaze. "Is the Seer like… a fortune teller?"

Lyriana shot him a look. "The Seer Vaelindra binds her soul to the river of the Aetherwell. She hears echoes of futures and whispers of ancient truths. Treat her with respect."

That sounded significantly more intimidating than a crystal ball.

Lyriana dimmed her bow with a gesture and motioned for Evan to follow. They ascended a root-spiral staircase until they reached a small circular chamber open to the forest canopy.

An elderly elf sat cross-legged at the center. Her hair was white-gold, her skin lined with age, though her ears were long and elegant. Her eyelids stayed closed as swirling motes of mana circled her.

When she spoke, her voice was soft but carried weight.

"Welcome, child of flame."

Evan froze. Lyriana's head snapped toward the elder. "Seer! You know of him already?"

Vaelindra smiled faintly. "Not know. Feel. His presence burns through the forest like dawn chasing night."

Lyriana stiffened. "We found him unconscious in the outer groves. I thought he might be a spy, or—"

"No spy," Vaelindra whispered. "And no ordinary soul."

The Seer lifted a trembling hand, motioning Evan closer. He knelt awkwardly before her.

Her fingers brushed his forehead.

The world turned white.

Evan's breath vanished. He felt weightless. Sound faded to a slow, echoing heartbeat. Then the world around him dissolved, replaced by swirling clouds of ember and shadow.

He stood in a void of flickering colors—flame-red, sun-gold, void-black. Shapes moved at the edges of sight: fragments of memories, futures, possibilities.

A voice boomed—not feminine, but ancient, deep, metallic.

"BEARER OF IGNITION."

Flames burst outward.

"SOUL OF SACRIFICE."

Light flooded his vision.

"THE HUNT BEGINS."

Suddenly Evan saw a silhouette—tall, skeletal, armored in cracked marble. Hollow eyes burned with pale blue flame. Its hand reached out, fingers sharp as obsidian.

The Pale Warden.

The moment its gaze locked onto him, cold terror shot through Evan's spine.

Then—

He gasped and collapsed back into the Seer's chamber, chest heaving.

Lyriana knelt beside him instantly. "Evan! Are you hurt?"

He shook his head, dizzy. "What… what was that?"

Vaelindra's eyes opened.

And they glowed entirely white.

"You carry the spark," she whispered. "A goddess touched your soul. But so too does something older—and darker—seek to claim it."

Evan swallowed hard. "That thing in the vision… it felt like it could see me."

"It can," Vaelindra said. "The Pale Warden hunts all who wield primordial Concepts. And you, child of another world… have awakened something it has long awaited."

Lyriana frowned. "He's being hunted? He arrived less than an hour ago!"

Vaelindra smiled sadly. "Destiny cares little for convenience."

Evan ran a shaky hand through his hair. "Okay. So what now? I just go out there and hope I don't get turned into charcoal by that… Warden thing?"

Vaelindra shook her head. "Hope is fragile. You will need strength."

The Test of Embers

The Seer reached behind her and pulled something from a wooden alcove.

A seed.

A faintly glowing ember-seed the size of a marble.

She placed it in Evan's hands. It pulsed with gentle heat.

"This is the Seed of First Flame. A relic from the dawn of Asterion. If your soul rejects it, you will burn from within. If it accepts you… you will be marked as one who carries the ember of creation."

Evan stared at the glowing mote."Only two options? Burn alive or get stronger?"

Lyriana crossed her arms. "At least you have options."

Evan glared at her.

Vaelindra nodded. "You must swallow it."

Lyriana raised an eyebrow. "He must what?"

"Swallow it," Vaelindra repeated, as if telling someone to drink water.

Evan looked between the two. "Is this a… normal thing here?"

"No," Lyriana said flatly.

"Yes," Vaelindra said serenely.

They exchanged glances. Evan sighed.

"Well, what's life without a little risk?"

He popped the ember-seed into his mouth.

It dissolved instantly.

Heat flooded his chest—then burst outward like a star igniting. His vision blurred. Every muscle tensed. Flames roared under his skin.

He screamed.

Lyriana lunged forward, grabbing him, steadying him, her usually cool expression now laced with alarm.

"Seer! Is he supposed to be—?!"

But Vaelindra only watched calmly. "His soul decides."

Evan's breath came in ragged gasps. Fire coiled through his veins like molten metal. His heartbeat thundered like a war drum.

Then—

A pulse of golden light exploded from his chest.

Lyriana shielded her eyes.

The light faded.

Evan collapsed to his knees, panting, drenched in sweat—but alive.

A soft chime rang in his ear.

[NEW TRAIT ACQUIRED: EMBERHEART]

Your soul has bonded with the Seed of First Flame.• Fire affinity increased• Vitality increased• Concept resonance: Ignition strengthened

Evan blinked as the text faded. "That… was intense."

Lyriana stared at him, eyes wide."You survived the Emberheart trial. Even our strongest warriors fail."

Vaelindra smiled knowingly. "He is meant to walk a path rarely taken."

Evan rubbed his chest, feeling lingering warmth. "Does this mean I can do magic now?"

"Only if you do not burn down my forest," Lyriana muttered.

"It would be an accident!"

"A predictable one."

Evan groaned. Elves apparently came preinstalled with sarcasm.

Vaelindra continued, "You may remain in Eldrathar—temporarily. The forest will accept you now. But beware: the Pale Warden's shadow lengthens. It will not stop."

Evan nodded slowly. "So… I stay close to you until I can handle myself?"

Lyriana sighed like someone who just agreed to babysit a baby dragon."It seems I am responsible for you. Try not to die. It would reflect poorly on my skill."

They descended from the Seer's Spire and reentered the forest path. Lyriana walked beside him now instead of ahead.

"So… you're not going to shoot me anymore?" Evan asked.

Lyriana shrugged. "I will not shoot you first."

"Comforting."

"You humans rely too much on comfort."

He almost tripped again when she gave a tiny smile—quick, almost unnoticeable. But it was there.

They walked in silence until Evan mustered the courage to ask:

"You and the Seer… are you related?"

"Seer Vaelindra is my grandmother." Lyriana's tone softened slightly. "She raised me after my parents fell in the war of the Phoenix Crown."

"Oh. I'm sorry."

She nodded but didn't elaborate.

Their path dipped into a grove of towering white trees whose leaves shimmered like glass. A stream of luminescent water wound between them.

"This way," Lyriana said. "Our village rests in the heart of the Celestgrove."

As they entered the grove, the forest seemed to brighten. Homes shaped from living wood curled around branches high above. Rope-bridges swayed gently, lit by floating orbs.

Elves paused to watch them—eyes sharp, unreadable. Some stared at Evan like he was a curiosity. Others whispered.

"Are they… talking about me?" he asked nervously.

Lyriana nodded. "Yes."

"Anything positive?"

"No."

She walked forward without missing a beat. Evan groaned.

They reached a broad wooden platform nestled between colossal branches. At the far end stood a tall elf with dark hair braided in intricate patterns, armored in shimmering leaves and steel.

"Captain Therin," Lyriana said, saluting with a fist over her heart. "I bring one who carries the Emberheart. The Seer has spoken."

Captain Therin eyed Evan critically. "He looks fragile."

Evan spluttered. "Hey! I survived eating a magical fire-seed!"

Therin smirked slightly. "So did I, at your age. Once."

Lyriana leaned toward Evan. "Do not challenge him. He once knocked a hill giant unconscious with a tree trunk."

Evan blinked. "Why a tree trunk? Why not a weapon?"

Lyriana shrugged. "The tree was closer."

Before Evan could respond, Therin stepped forward.

"You carry a powerful spark, outsider. But power without discipline is a blade with no sheath. If you are to stay among us, you will train. Lyriana will instruct you."

Evan turned to her. Her expression was unreadable.

"I will teach him," she said. "But he must follow our ways."

Therin nodded. "Then by the law of Eldrathar, you claim responsibility for him."

Lyriana's jaw tensed. "I do."

A ceremonial duty. Serious, binding.

Evan swallowed. "Is that… a big deal?"

Lyriana looked into his eyes. "If you break our trust, I will face the consequences."

"Oh." He stood straighter. "I won't let you down."

To his surprise, Lyriana seemed moved, if only slightly.

"Good," she said softly.

Nightfall in the Celestgrove

They gave Evan a small guest dwelling nestled in a tree hollow. Inside, soft moss lined the floor, a crystal lantern glowed steadily, and warm air circulated as if the tree itself breathed.

He sat on the bed, letting the events of the day crash over him.

He died.He met a goddess.He was reborn.He swallowed a magical seed.He faced a terrifying vision.An elf had taken responsibility for him.

His head throbbed.

A soft chime echoed.

A new system message.

[QUEST: EMBERS OF BEGINNING]

Objective 1: Gain the trust of Lyriana VaelwynObjective 2: Learn basic Aether manipulationObjective 3: Survive

Reward: ???Failure: Death

"Great," Evan muttered. "At least the system is honest."

A soft knocking sounded at the door.

Lyriana stood there, moonlight framing her silhouette.

"I brought food," she said, handing him a wooden bowl filled with steaming broth and herb bread. "Humans do not fare well on an empty stomach."

Evan smiled tiredly. "Thanks."

She lingered in the doorway, studying him. "This world will not show mercy, Evan Arclight. But you… you did not falter during the Emberheart trial. That matters."

He blinked. "Are you saying you're starting to trust me?"

Lyriana's expression softened for just a moment. "Perhaps."

She turned to leave.

"Lyriana?" he called gently.

She paused.

"…I'm glad you're the one guiding me."

The faintest blush touched her cheeks—gone as quickly as it came.

"Rest well," she said, and disappeared into the night.

Evan lay back, staring at the glowing lantern.

Tomorrow, his training would begin.

Tomorrow, his new life would truly start.

And far beyond the village, in the depths of shadowed woods…something ancient stirred, sensing the ember that had just awakened.

The hunt had begun.