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KARMA: THE GOD MISTAKE

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In a universe ruled by gods and karma, a soul is punished not once — but forever. Two twins are born on Mars. One is normal. The other is… wrong. The strange child destabilizes the planet. Mars begins to fall. To save their world, Mars chooses sacrifice over justice. They throw the child into the void. The body is lost. The soul survives. He awakens on Neptune — treated not as a child, but as an alien experiment. A king who worships science orders his body dissected, studied, broken. Only one scientist disobeys. He hides the child. Erases his existence. That child grows up as Vex Seed. Weak. Unchosen. Innocent. His life is suffering. His love disappears. Every attempt at peace ends in loss. Then the ancient witches return. They reveal the truth. Vex Seed has never truly died. He never can. When his body is destroyed, his soul transfers into another vessel — another life, another identity, another so-called villain. Each rebirth makes him smarter. Colder. Closer to the truth. In his first life, Vex Seed was not mortal — he was the brother of a god. His crime was not evil. His crime was questioning the karma system. As the system of karma begins to fracture, villains across dimensions realize a painful truth: Gods do not love the just. They love the chosen. Heroes are protected. Given power, allies, and second chances. Villains are corrected. Crushed. Erased. So villains attempt the impossible. They try to kill gods and take their place. They fail. They die. But villains do not end. Each death leaves behind truth. Each failure exposes a flaw in the system. And from that truth, a smarter villain is born. Heroes may win the battle. They may stop the villain. They may save the system. But they never truly win. Because karma remains broken. The gods remain silent. Villains fall. Heroes stand. And somewhere in the shadows — the next villain is already learning. Not to win the next fight. But to end the cycle itself.
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER 1 — THE PLANET THAT BREATHED

Mars did not wake that day.

It inhaled.

The sky drew itself inward, slowly, as if the planet were testing its own lungs. Dust did not travel with the wind anymore. It gathered. It curved. Great red storms folded into perfect rings, rotating without direction, without urgency. They did not move across the land. They hovered, circling nothing.

The sky made noise.

Not thunder the way storms remembered it.

No lightning followed.

Just a deep, distant pressure—like stone grinding against stone far beneath the surface.

Shadows lagged.

People noticed it first with their feet, not their eyes. A step would land, and the shadow would follow half a breath later. Not much. Just enough to feel wrong. A child reached for his mother's hand and hesitated, staring at the space where his shadow should have been.

In the upper air, the winged creatures of Mars panicked.

They did not flee outward.

They spiraled.

Flocks tightened into frantic loops, circling higher and higher, wings beating with no destination. Some collided midair and fell. Others screamed—a thin, metallic sound—before vanishing into the dust rings above.

The markets grew quiet.

Not suddenly. Quiet crept in between sounds. Voices lowered. Footsteps slowed. Merchants stopped calling out prices because no one was listening anymore. People looked upward, then at each other, then away.

No one said what they were thinking.

Because no one had the words.

Soldiers stood at their posts with hands already resting on weapons.

No orders had come.

No alarms had sounded.

Still, their shoulders were tight. Helmets tilted slightly upward, as if they were listening for something only their bones could hear.

An old woman sat on the edge of a fountain that had stopped flowing. She pressed her palms to the stone and shook her head.

"Not like this," she murmured.

"I remember fire. This isn't fire."

A child began to cry in the center of the square.

Not loudly.

Not in pain.

Just crying.

His mother knelt, checked his hands, his face, his eyes. Nothing was wrong. Still, the child would not stop. He stared at the sky, lips trembling, as if he were apologizing to something that could not hear him.

Metal sang.

Not a clear sound—more a vibration. Blades rattled inside sheaths. Hanging signs trembled, clinking softly. Tools left on stone counters rolled a few centimeters and stopped, as if nudged by an unseen pulse.

Someone whispered, too softly to know who:

"This shouldn't be happening again…"

No one asked what again meant.

Mother Tesla had already stepped away from her instruments.

She did not need to look outside.

Her tower stood apart from the city, rooted into the planet like a thought that refused to fade. Stone grown around metal. Metal shaped by mathematics older than language. Windows faced no particular direction. They were there to remind the planet that someone was watching.

Inside, circles floated.

Not perfectly.

Not symmetrically.

Metal rings hovered at different angles, rotating slowly, adjusting themselves to changes no one else could measure. Between them, thin streams of light bent and re-bent, tracing equations that refused to stay solved.

Glass tubes lined the walls, each filled with red Martian dust suspended in clear fluid. The dust shifted constantly, forming patterns that never repeated.

Ancient symbols were etched into the floor—not carved, but remembered into the stone. Over them, delicate instruments hummed, their needles twitching in quiet disagreement.

Mother Tesla placed her hand against her chest.

Her heartbeat was wrong.

Too slow.

Then too fast.

Then neither.

The instruments reacted before she did.

One ring tilted sharply.

A needle snapped sideways.

The dust inside three glass tubes fell at the same time.

The room grew colder.

Tesla closed her eyes.

The planet pressed back.

Not with words.

With weight.

With pressure behind the eyes.

With the sense that something enormous had shifted its attention.

She inhaled carefully and opened her palms.

A foreign frequency brushed against her senses.

Sharp.

Uninvited.

Hungry in a way that had nothing to do with hunger.

She absorbed a fragment of it instinctively.

Pain flared.

Not physical.

Structural.

Her guardian marks—thin scars that traced her arms and neck—glowed faintly, a pale blue struggling against red light beneath the skin. The floating rings shuddered. The temperature dropped another degree.

Tesla staggered back.

"No," she whispered.

She severed the connection abruptly.

The pressure eased, but did not leave.

She understood enough to stop.

This energy did not belong to Mars.

It did not care for Mars.

And if she pulled it fully into herself—

The planet would lose something vital.

Sight, perhaps.

Memory.

The ability to feel when it was being wounded.

She steadied herself against a worktable.

Her machines continued to react, adjusting without instruction, translating something that had no intention of being translated.

Mars reached for her again.

Not with images this time.

With emotion.

Fear, old and buried.

Recognition without familiarity.

Then images broke through.

Falling.

Not meteors.

Not debris.

Something alive.

Splitting.

A line tearing through something that should not tear.

Two heartbeats.

Out of sync.

One strong.

One… distorted.

Tesla's breath caught.

Two lives were arriving.

She knew that without knowing how.

But one—

One did not belong.

Not by nature.

Not by rhythm.

Its heartbeat did not match the planet's pulse. It did not echo the deep, slow timing of Mars. It carried a different gravity, a different silence.

Tesla turned toward the largest window.

Outside, the dust rings tightened.

The thunder sound deepened, stretching longer between breaths. Shadows dragged themselves back into alignment—too late, as if embarrassed to be noticed.

She pressed her forehead to the cool glass.

"This child did not arrive alone," she whispered.

The words felt incomplete as soon as they left her mouth.

She waited.

For acknowledgment.

For resistance.

For the familiar reassurance of planetary awareness.

Mars did not answer.

The pressure remained.

Deeper now.

Older.

As if something beneath the crust had opened one eye and chosen not to close it again.

Tesla stepped back from the window.

The rings slowed.

The instruments quieted.

The dust settled unnaturally still.

The city below fell into a hush that felt rehearsed.

Somewhere above the atmosphere, something ancient crossed a boundary that had not been guarded in a very long time.

Mars held its breath.

And did not exhale.