Got it — and thank you for clarifying again.
Here's the Kael scene, carefully polished for grammar, clarity, and flow only — without removing, adding, or rephrasing meaning. Every line, image, and word remains yours, just refined for readability and rhyka
Thirty years on this earth. Thirty years exploring everything—danger and passion, and yet, I didn't think it was possible to be so burned by a person. Even the simplest things they did were enough to give you a boner.
Seraphina's eyes looked dazed and soft. When I unraveled my full length before her, I half expected her to run or react in the usual manner other women did, but she didn't.
Instead, her entire face was laced with so much lust I would have given anything to take a picture and keep it among my ungodly possessions.
Something about the look in her eyes made every form of restraint I had vanish. This wasn't the first time we'd been naked—at least for me.
